My Everything!
2-4-2 contest entry23 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
Jesus lives and sits on the right and of the Father. He waits and watches us all, smiling and sometimes sheading tears. His love for us is His Father love. Jesus is the light and the way to the Father, who sends us to His Son.. Thank you for sharing. This is a good entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry Contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Jesus lives and sits on the right and of the Father. He waits and watches us all, smiling and sometimes sheading tears. His love for us is His Father love. Jesus is the light and the way to the Father, who sends us to His Son.. Thank you for sharing. This is a good entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry Contest.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for the great review and your very nice comments. We are so blessed! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Only 7 words and 8 syllables in this 2-4-2 Poetry contest entry but they sum up an entire religion and the faith of millions. The artwork used here is amazing. Beautiful work. i wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Only 7 words and 8 syllables in this 2-4-2 Poetry contest entry but they sum up an entire religion and the faith of millions. The artwork used here is amazing. Beautiful work. i wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for this great review and your very nice comments. love and blessings, teri
Comment from barbara.wilkey
AMEN!!! Yes, Jesus rose from the dead and He is alive today. I get concerned when I read that the Bible isn't relevant today. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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AMEN!!! Yes, Jesus rose from the dead and He is alive today. I get concerned when I read that the Bible isn't relevant today. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much my friend for this great review and your very nice and so true comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I so agree with you that Jesus is everything. He also solves problems or burdens we have. This morning, I authored a short story about how important identity is to us. He is the truth, and He gives us life.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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I so agree with you that Jesus is everything. He also solves problems or burdens we have. This morning, I authored a short story about how important identity is to us. He is the truth, and He gives us life.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Amen! Thank you for this great review and for your very true comments. He is our everything and He helps us along our way! love and blessings, teri
Comment from GWHARGIS
I think your tiny 2/4/2 poem really packed a punch. Your faith has shined through in this. I am enjoying your faith based poetry. Let your light shine. Gretchen
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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I think your tiny 2/4/2 poem really packed a punch. Your faith has shined through in this. I am enjoying your faith based poetry. Let your light shine. Gretchen
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much Gretchen for this great review and your very nice and true comments. love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Lisasview
Hi Dearest Teri,
Yes, trying to put important thoughts into just a 2-4-2 poem is so difficult... But you did such an excellent job of making your point nice and clear.
Lisasview
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Hi Dearest Teri,
Yes, trying to put important thoughts into just a 2-4-2 poem is so difficult... But you did such an excellent job of making your point nice and clear.
Lisasview
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much Lisa for this great review and your very nice comments. I hope all is going well with you sweet friend! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, My Everything, has the proper formatting and announces the position that God holds in your life. Things have been so busy here that I lost track of Easter being right around the bend.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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This 2-4-2, My Everything, has the proper formatting and announces the position that God holds in your life. Things have been so busy here that I lost track of Easter being right around the bend.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much Bill for this great review and your very kind comments. I pray things get easier for you and Kathy! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Teri.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-A very good message using only a few words.
-A good reminder that "He still lives."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Teri.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-A very good message using only a few words.
-A good reminder that "He still lives."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much Pam for this great review and your very nice comments that are so true! love and blessings, Teri
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You are very welcome, Teri.
Comment from Sally Law
Just lovely as can be in super short verse poetry, Teri dear. Jesus is Lord and He is EVERYTHING! He's coming soon too! Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest.
Love, Sal Xos
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Just lovely as can be in super short verse poetry, Teri dear. Jesus is Lord and He is EVERYTHING! He's coming soon too! Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes in the upcoming contest.
Love, Sal Xos
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much Sal for this great review and your very lovely and so true comments. I pray you have a wonderful Easter too! love and blessings, Teri
Comment from teafor2
Teri7, nice picture to accompany your compressed verbiage to get the most from limited 8 syllables write. Itty bitty tiny suggestion: IMHO, making the 8 syllables "Bolder" would emphasize scribes pious feelings and highlight the exclamation mark even more. Well done. teafor2
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Teri7, nice picture to accompany your compressed verbiage to get the most from limited 8 syllables write. Itty bitty tiny suggestion: IMHO, making the 8 syllables "Bolder" would emphasize scribes pious feelings and highlight the exclamation mark even more. Well done. teafor2
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for this great review and your very nice and helpful comments. I will try to do that when we get home on my computer! Blessings and Happy Easter my friend! Teri
