Almost Late
Guy almost late for a date15 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gunner, a very cool car for a date, but not if it doesn't start--ouch!
I think being late is better than breaking down on the road with your date. Fun poem. Great photo. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Hi Gunner, a very cool car for a date, but not if it doesn't start--ouch!
I think being late is better than breaking down on the road with your date. Fun poem. Great photo. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Comment from jake cosmos aller
a fun short little poem about being late to an important date when you car decides to take a break just because it is an ornely SOB at times as cars can be.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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a fun short little poem about being late to an important date when you car decides to take a break just because it is an ornely SOB at times as cars can be.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Comment from Janet Foor
LOL !!! I think you passed me on your way to your date.
A clever and humorous poem to tell us a story in just a few words.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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LOL !!! I think you passed me on your way to your date.
A clever and humorous poem to tell us a story in just a few words.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Let down by a car? Or perhaps this car refused to go above the speed limit? You made me smile with this one, being late can be a curse, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Let down by a car? Or perhaps this car refused to go above the speed limit? You made me smile with this one, being late can be a curse, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Comment from SimianSavant
A mustang is both an animal and a car. Not sure what all these people are complaining about, saying it's not about nature. I had a silver Mustang not so long ago, named Olga, and she got me to many a date on time.
One thing I would consider to improve this is to post a sexier pic of your Mustang, maybe with the horsey logo visible, to shut everyone up : ) and maybe a font befitting the style of the vehicle.
Regards,
Harambe (for President)
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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A mustang is both an animal and a car. Not sure what all these people are complaining about, saying it's not about nature. I had a silver Mustang not so long ago, named Olga, and she got me to many a date on time.
One thing I would consider to improve this is to post a sexier pic of your Mustang, maybe with the horsey logo visible, to shut everyone up : ) and maybe a font befitting the style of the vehicle.
Regards,
Harambe (for President)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Comment from Brenda Strauser
I liked reading your poem. The mustang is perfect for the picture. I hate being late. I try to be on time as much as I can be. My dad had a fit when I was late. I guess it is from him. Very good job for the picture.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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I liked reading your poem. The mustang is perfect for the picture. I hate being late. I try to be on time as much as I can be. My dad had a fit when I was late. I guess it is from him. Very good job for the picture.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Comment from Raul1
The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Nice. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Nice. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Comment from Brett Matthew West
This 5-7-5 poem details one small factor many people dread and that is being late for whatever the reason may be.
While having a fast car, such as a Mustang, provides additional speed going faster on the road is not always the safest, or the smartest, choice.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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This 5-7-5 poem details one small factor many people dread and that is being late for whatever the reason may be.
While having a fast car, such as a Mustang, provides additional speed going faster on the road is not always the safest, or the smartest, choice.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Comment from bob cullen
Miss or Master Leadfoot, for your sake I hope the highway control is not working tonight. Maybe I should also confess to a degree of envy. If you come around my way, would you please allow me a drive of your 'Tang. I promise I won't speed, too excessively.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Miss or Master Leadfoot, for your sake I hope the highway control is not working tonight. Maybe I should also confess to a degree of envy. If you come around my way, would you please allow me a drive of your 'Tang. I promise I won't speed, too excessively.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Comment from LJbutterfly
An entire creative and humorous story is expressed in just a few well chosen words that peak the imagination. Each line smoothly connected to the previous line and led to a satisfying ending. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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An entire creative and humorous story is expressed in just a few well chosen words that peak the imagination. Each line smoothly connected to the previous line and led to a satisfying ending. Well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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