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2024 Japanese Poetry

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Makes one wonder if his wife does too. This is a naughty but innocent poem. The presentation is wonderful. I enjoyed reading and smiled. It caused me to remember a few of my Victoria's Secret negligees when my figure could still pull it off.

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara. It's always a pleasure.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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ooh this was a cool gogyohka
there's so much unsaid between those 5 lines
great imagery and smooth flow

nice! thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 29-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I remember when Victoria Secret first started showing up at Malls. My mother went in and after perusing the skimpy items she walked out saying, "Well, f she just wearing that, it won't be secret much longer." I've never been able to forget that. Lol. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
    LoL. Thank you very much, Gretchen.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
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Ouch, dating can be hard, I wonder if the truth was known, or the woman was happy having an affair, no matter, the pain of rejection still hurts, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much,

    Gypsy
Comment from royowen
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Oh yes, I wonder if indeed she is wearing this negligee or not. Although I gave different ones to my wife, and of course my wife, I wonder if they've swapped the, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
    Thank you very much,

    Gypsy
reply by royowen on 29-Feb-2024
    Bless you
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh dear! Since the negligee is gathering dust, I guess the marriage is working out okay and the narrator should set her hopes on a man who isn't married.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
    Yes, loving a married man is the worse idea for so many reasons. For sure, both woman get hurt and the guy is a loser. And waste of time.

    Thank you, big sister.

    Love

    Marival