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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh yes, an original take on the horror theme here which I enjoyed reading! It all starts off quite prosaically until the tone starts to change in the second stanza and, by the third, she's a goner too and then a tasty addition to the stew in the fourth! Excellent! Well carried off in verse form too! Great contender! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Oh yes, an original take on the horror theme here which I enjoyed reading! It all starts off quite prosaically until the tone starts to change in the second stanza and, by the third, she's a goner too and then a tasty addition to the stew in the fourth! Excellent! Well carried off in verse form too! Great contender! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you, l appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from Baltimore Born
This was very horrific. The poem reads and flows well. Each line connected well with the next. The last stanza closes well. Your picture compliments the poem. Nice job.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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This was very horrific. The poem reads and flows well. Each line connected well with the next. The last stanza closes well. Your picture compliments the poem. Nice job.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for this great review. :)
Comment from Jeano
Read them all, and although they were horror stories about rats and killers and such, I liked your "stew" story best. I think it was clever, with an unexpected ending. I think you might have the winner with this one. That said, I've found that my favorite usually comes in at number two. Good luck.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Read them all, and although they were horror stories about rats and killers and such, I liked your "stew" story best. I think it was clever, with an unexpected ending. I think you might have the winner with this one. That said, I've found that my favorite usually comes in at number two. Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you, this nice review means a lot to me. :)
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You're welcome.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Another poem that is mind-boggling. Do you ever remember the story about Ed Gein, who always ate human flesh? This story-like poem reminded me of him. Check out his story sometimes. It is a true horror story.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Another poem that is mind-boggling. Do you ever remember the story about Ed Gein, who always ate human flesh? This story-like poem reminded me of him. Check out his story sometimes. It is a true horror story.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I have heard that story...very gruesome. He actually made lampshades out of human skin. Thank you for reading my poem.
Comment from Nathan Allen
Short sweet and what a treat. It entices the palate and makes one mouth water but then dissipates it all in one fell swoop. I was so suprised ans hungry at the same time.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Short sweet and what a treat. It entices the palate and makes one mouth water but then dissipates it all in one fell swoop. I was so suprised ans hungry at the same time.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Hahaha..thank you for this starry review. :)
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
I really liked this poem, and the ending was unexpected! You set the scene well! I like how you talk about the lovers are in a stew, when Brad is actually already in the stew! Great job!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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I really liked this poem, and the ending was unexpected! You set the scene well! I like how you talk about the lovers are in a stew, when Brad is actually already in the stew! Great job!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Thank you, l appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Julie Helms
"You're lover's in a stew,
from me finding about the two of you."
Oh, ho, ho, I knew we were in big trouble right then!
You told a complete story very briefly in poetic form with high impact. Nicely done!
perhaps?", she said (perhaps?" she said)
Julie
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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"You're lover's in a stew,
from me finding about the two of you."
Oh, ho, ho, I knew we were in big trouble right then!
You told a complete story very briefly in poetic form with high impact. Nicely done!
perhaps?", she said (perhaps?" she said)
Julie
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much for this nice review. :)
Comment from kiwisteveh
Well, I've just finished re-reading "Hannibal" about Doctor Hannibal Lecter so the ending of your tale was maybe unsurprising, but even the good evil Doctor would have appreciated the calm nonchalance with which you disposed of the treacherous duo.
I suspect 'compliment' should really be complement in this context.
I enjoyed the gruesome climax and the lighthearted tone with which it was delivered.
Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Well, I've just finished re-reading "Hannibal" about Doctor Hannibal Lecter so the ending of your tale was maybe unsurprising, but even the good evil Doctor would have appreciated the calm nonchalance with which you disposed of the treacherous duo.
I suspect 'compliment' should really be complement in this context.
I enjoyed the gruesome climax and the lighthearted tone with which it was delivered.
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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I guess the ending was a bit predictable...l watched Hannibal also, it was great. Thanks for reading. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is nothing quite like a chunky hot soup full of nourishment during the winter months and I enjoyed this recipe, then you suddenly turned this into a horror story and added blood to the mix here, an inventive murder story, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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There is nothing quite like a chunky hot soup full of nourishment during the winter months and I enjoyed this recipe, then you suddenly turned this into a horror story and added blood to the mix here, an inventive murder story, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. :)
