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A desert, or a mirage in the dessert

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Comment from rlee
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How you aroused my interest was very well done. I have spent time in Alaska and, having a mother who baked the best "Baked Alaska" ever, the two factors made the poem that much more enjoyable. Syllable count was spot on as well. A excellent job.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024

Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Well this one makes me hungry for dessert! It is a thoughtful and pretty piece of work. I think the shorter poetry is the harder it is to get the point across. Well done you! xx Kiwi

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024