Love Doesn't Die
Love poem for deceased husband,34 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Well written Beth, and you're right love does transcend time and that final journey into the next stage, one wouldn't stop loving a child, and one shouldn't stop loving their life long partner, so many memories shared. Nicely written in pentameter and abbey rhyming, well done my friend, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Well written Beth, and you're right love does transcend time and that final journey into the next stage, one wouldn't stop loving a child, and one shouldn't stop loving their life long partner, so many memories shared. Nicely written in pentameter and abbey rhyming, well done my friend, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you Roy for a wonderful review. I'm so glad you like my poem.
Beth
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Welcome Beth
Comment from Lisasview
I can not stop crying dearest Beth ... Your poem evoked so much emotion from me.
This is such a wonderful heartfelt Valentine poem...and I do wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
Lisa
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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I can not stop crying dearest Beth ... Your poem evoked so much emotion from me.
This is such a wonderful heartfelt Valentine poem...and I do wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
Lisa
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Oh Lisa, I didn't want it to make anyone cry. I know it must have touched a vulnerable area in your heart. In the end you can find joy knowing you have precious memories if you lost someone recently.
Thank you so much for the revies.
Comment from bob cullen
A really beautiful tribute to your late husband and congratulations on such a successful marriage. My wife and I are come up for fifty years in August this year, though we did have an eleven year break after 24 years. We then remarried.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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A really beautiful tribute to your late husband and congratulations on such a successful marriage. My wife and I are come up for fifty years in August this year, though we did have an eleven year break after 24 years. We then remarried.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much Bob. I'm so glad you liked my poem and I'm glad you have that kind of marriage as well even though you took a little break.
Berh
Comment from Wendy G
Such a beautiful poem of love of long duration. Not many people can attest to sixty years of love and happiness, with no regrets. I wishe you every success in the contest - a very skilfully written and moving entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Such a beautiful poem of love of long duration. Not many people can attest to sixty years of love and happiness, with no regrets. I wishe you every success in the contest - a very skilfully written and moving entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Wendy. I was fortunate to have 61 years. He was nine year older than me. I glad I have the great memories that I have.
Beth
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Beth, this poem is absolutely beautiful. It is heartfelt and filled with loving memories. Of special note:
Although I can no longer see your face,
there's not a single day I would erase,
(Wow, that's says it all.)
Silky rhyming. Lovely photo choice. A pleasure to read. Well done.
Margaret ~ LateBloomer
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Hello Beth, this poem is absolutely beautiful. It is heartfelt and filled with loving memories. Of special note:
Although I can no longer see your face,
there's not a single day I would erase,
(Wow, that's says it all.)
Silky rhyming. Lovely photo choice. A pleasure to read. Well done.
Margaret ~ LateBloomer
Comment Written 13-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much for the review and the six stars. I'm sorry I'm so late saying thank you. I'm running way behind but I do appreciate it and I 'm so glad you enjoyed the poem.
Beth
Comment from lyenochka
Beautifully expressed, Beth! You and Evan had a deep and lifelong love that kept growing over the years no matter how hard it got at times and that shows that is real love that never dies. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Beautifully expressed, Beth! You and Evan had a deep and lifelong love that kept growing over the years no matter how hard it got at times and that shows that is real love that never dies. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much Helen. I wish everyone hae a good marriage. It would aweful to live in a bad one where there was no love.
Beth
Comment from w.j.debi
This is a tender tribute to a lost love and the faith that you will meet again. One lifetime is not enough for those that love each other.
Excellent rhyming in your well-written quatrains.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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This is a tender tribute to a lost love and the faith that you will meet again. One lifetime is not enough for those that love each other.
Excellent rhyming in your well-written quatrains.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you Debi. I really appreciate the lovely review.
Beth
Comment from Jeano
Beautifully written. A tribute to everlasting love. My husband and I will be celebrating our 60th anniversary this year on leap year day. What was I thinking? Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Beautifully written. A tribute to everlasting love. My husband and I will be celebrating our 60th anniversary this year on leap year day. What was I thinking? Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Congratulation for a long marriage as well. I think I might have waited until March 1. You only get to celebrate on the actual day ever four years. Thanks so much for the review and comments.
Beth
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Thank you. We eloped and didn't realize there were 29 days in Feb. that year. He gave some pretty nice gifts every four years. LOL
You're welcome.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is simply and beautifully expressed, recording the love you still have in your heart for your late husband. This tribute to him and the many decades you shared together perfectly fits the contest brief and I wish you luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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This is simply and beautifully expressed, recording the love you still have in your heart for your late husband. This tribute to him and the many decades you shared together perfectly fits the contest brief and I wish you luck! Debbie
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you Debbie. I really appreciate the lovely review. I'm so glad you liked.
Beth
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is beautiful Beth. I totally agree, love doesn't die with them, we keep them with us in our hearts and through our memories. A beautiful presentation for the Valentine's contest and I wish you good luck in it.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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This is beautiful Beth. I totally agree, love doesn't die with them, we keep them with us in our hearts and through our memories. A beautiful presentation for the Valentine's contest and I wish you good luck in it.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much Valda. I really appreciate the review and comments.
Beth
