Arrows
A cynical love poem3 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
What?! JUDESTER??!! Well, THERE'S a blast from my past!! So good to see you on here again!
And I love your first offering, just in time for my favorite holiday of the year. And you're right: men are a bit skittish about the day, aren't they? All those (whisper) FEELINGS involved, the possible COMMITMENT!! Oy, it's enough to make a man join the Army, isn't it? Preferring to take a bullet to having to participate in romantic endeavors!!
You definitely nailed it with this one. Welcome home!! xoxox
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What?! JUDESTER??!! Well, THERE'S a blast from my past!! So good to see you on here again!
And I love your first offering, just in time for my favorite holiday of the year. And you're right: men are a bit skittish about the day, aren't they? All those (whisper) FEELINGS involved, the possible COMMITMENT!! Oy, it's enough to make a man join the Army, isn't it? Preferring to take a bullet to having to participate in romantic endeavors!!
You definitely nailed it with this one. Welcome home!! xoxox
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. Your last stanza gives us an unexpected twist tin this poem. This poem flows well. Your picture speaks volume. From start to finish very good poem.
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This is a well-crafted poem. Your last stanza gives us an unexpected twist tin this poem. This poem flows well. Your picture speaks volume. From start to finish very good poem.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Well this is a different and valid perspective. My love poem was about babies' stomach gas, so I get it. Still, it is excellent writing. It is full of good sensory words and vibrant imagery. The image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
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Well this is a different and valid perspective. My love poem was about babies' stomach gas, so I get it. Still, it is excellent writing. It is full of good sensory words and vibrant imagery. The image supports your words well. Thank you for sharing this. Many writers will relate to this. I enjoyed reviewing it.
Best wishes!
Alex
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
