Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Young love, for sure in this image. Flowers, candy, and kindness will entice these young people to appreciate and respect each other. It's not always easy to grow up in a world of complications.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024

Thank you for this great review. :)

Comment from mrsmajor

Excellent

Nice rhyming in this poem, and the picture is great...
I've never thought of a person as a "device" but it rhymes with entice, so I guess that's a good thing.
All the best, good luck in the contest!

Warmly,
Victoria

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024

Thanks so much for this great review. :)

reply by mrsmajor on 23-Jan-2024

My Pleasure!

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This poem was sweet, and I loved your rhyme scheme. The picture added to the poem's appeal. I might have left out the comma after "device," but that's just me. It's fine the way you wrote it. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024

Thanks for this nice review and the good tip. I changed it. :)

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with the nice addition of the three rhymes
while maintaining the theme.
Excellent art work too.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024

Thanks so much for this terrific review. :)

Comment from Allieas

Excellent

Sweet romantic poem, reminded me of young love. I enjoyed the imagery it evoked, and you chose a fitting picture! Thank you for sharing this and good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024

Thank you, l appreciate this wonderful review. :)