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Colorado Etching

This poem is about morning optimism and insight.

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Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Interesting this is what I call to write for the sake of writing "orning, Puerto fuerte
I'm pleased to have you host my lethargy
This stuff always gets burned off by the time it seems to need to
Don't read too much into me, I'm only practicing today
I'm just warming up my thumbs, so to speak
For to hitch hike from agenda to river side
To acclimate into a new day skin and go diving
There's almost always treasure here
In the form of potential evidence discarded
One mans ditches are another man's riche", thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

Comment from T.A. Walk
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Wonderful first post! Can't wait to see more! Glad you decided to share here!

No SPAG critique to offer this time!

Thank you for sharing your work! Good luck in the upcoming contest!!

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2024