Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Nice changes to this lovely piece Barbara. I last line says it all. We all need to I now live our lives the best I can by His guidance.

Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023

Thank you so much Dear Janet. Amen. Makes life so much better. XO. Blessings. B

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Hi-- I see you've done some revisions, but this is essentially the poem you posted on 12/1/23. Rules dictate you should not post a previous title as "new" even if it is heavily edited. You should probably disable the previous one if this is the one you are happy with. Please notify Tom if you're not sure how to do that. I know... it gets confusing sometimes!

Karenina

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023

It was posted as revised. At least it is what I believe. I will disable the first one though. TY, Karenina. XO B

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

Barbara, this is a very lovely and very well written poem you have penned that is so full of the truth. I am very thankful for the Holy Spirit. He is always with us, and He will help u, if we only ask! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2023

Thank you, Dear Teri. I so appreciate your kind comments and the special star. God Bless. XO, Barbara

Comment from Wy Jung

Excellent

The only change I would make is make the pink a little lighter and the font a little larger.
While the sentiments here differ than mine, the flow is very nice and the use of imagery will be connectable to like minded people. Well done

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023

Thank you, How very kind of you. XO Blessings. Barbara

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I think you posted this same poem on December 1. The words are the same but the formatting different. The picture is the same. Anyway, it's still very true!

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023

I added the Holy Spirit , so revised. TY, for reving again. Had to do it. Blessings. XO B

reply by lyenochka on 04-Dec-2023

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Comment from Yusita

Excellent

This is a wonderful write that bears much truth and a deep message. In regards to the second stanza, it's true--many times because of a lack of self-worth, we do things that further damages it. Many times we try to satisfy our craving in the wrongs ways and the wrong places. A very meaningful write.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023

Thank you, so much. Your kindness is much appreciated. XO Blessings. B

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I could have sworn I reviewed this. I certainly meant to. I must've been called away. Anyway, physical touch and sex is a need we all share but it's not the only one. Our need for God and His love drives us, and oftentimes don't we don't recognize what it is. We try to fulfill our need for Him with other things like sinful pursuits or even noble causes. Either way, they don't and can't satisfy. Only God fits on the throne within. Wonderfully penned and illustrated poem, my friend.
Sending you my best today as always,
Love,
Sal xoxo

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023

You did review it before Sal. I had to revise it and add the Holy Spirit. TY, for reviewing it again. XO Blessings. B

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a beautifully written poem that you have written for us today. I enjoyed it very much. Your presentation is beautiful. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a very merry Christmas and a prosperous and happy new year. Patricia.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2023

Thank you, Patricia and the same to you. God Bless. XO, B