Reticence
Silence can be heard if one listens.2 total reviews
Comment from Jacob1395
I love it when I can just relax, and not have to think about anything, although that's becoming rarer and rarer now. It seems that my brain can never be silent, especially when I'm trying to get to sleep. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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I love it when I can just relax, and not have to think about anything, although that's becoming rarer and rarer now. It seems that my brain can never be silent, especially when I'm trying to get to sleep. A well written piece. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
It is hard sometimes to have one's brain remain silent.
Comment from JT traveller
Nice poem. Just a small suggestion, "Silence can be heard of one listens." If instead of of?
Overall an enjoyable composition with good content. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Nice poem. Just a small suggestion, "Silence can be heard of one listens." If instead of of?
Overall an enjoyable composition with good content. Best of luck.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2023
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Thanks so much for your review and suggestion.
It is very much appreciated.
