November 5-7-5
winter is not far behind10 total reviews
Comment from Lisasview
Great image for your very lovely poem dear Janet. Always enjoy reading your words...
Lisasview, need to get back to decorating our very big Christmas tree....
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Great image for your very lovely poem dear Janet. Always enjoy reading your words...
Lisasview, need to get back to decorating our very big Christmas tree....
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much Lisa for your heartfelt review.
Enjoy your decorating. 🎄 🎁
Blessings and Merry Christmas!!!
Janet
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You are so welcome Janet... By the way i won first place for Tender!!
Comment from Sally Law
What a delight to see my friend in a contest. This one is terrific and you should know all about the woolies in November.
Sending you all my best today as always.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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What a delight to see my friend in a contest. This one is terrific and you should know all about the woolies in November.
Sending you all my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 09-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review my friend.
The month of November was always drab and cold in PA but then came December and the beautiful snow that made everything bright again.
But the woolies were sometimes needed until May. Haha
Thanks for the good wishes too.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Haven't I used that picture before? I have found the mother load of free pictures on Pinterest. The only problem is I get enthralled watching the laughing baby pictures and lose time. They always brighten my day. Good work here. Karen
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Haven't I used that picture before? I have found the mother load of free pictures on Pinterest. The only problem is I get enthralled watching the laughing baby pictures and lose time. They always brighten my day. Good work here. Karen
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Thanks for the fun review. Pinterest is a fun and helpful site.
Blessings
Janet
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the November 5-7-5 writing prompt contest.
Lol funny.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Excellent entry for the November 5-7-5 writing prompt contest.
Lol funny.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Thank you Gypsy for your most encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Wendy G
Well done. Over here, woolies can refer to any woollen garments eg sweaters and pullovers. Very nice 5-7-5, well written. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Well done. Over here, woolies can refer to any woollen garments eg sweaters and pullovers. Very nice 5-7-5, well written. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Thanks Wendy for your encouraging review.
Woolies can mean the same here. Young people today probably never heard the word. Haha
Blessings
Janet
Comment from royowen
Of course our Novembers would be decidedly different, it's late autumn here, entering into summer, but I can see November heralding winter, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Of course our Novembers would be decidedly different, it's late autumn here, entering into summer, but I can see November heralding winter, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Thank you Roy for your thoughtful review. We do have opposite seasons.
Blessings
Janet
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My pleasure
Comment from jim vecchio
This was a lighthearted take on the "November 5-7-5' contest. That cabin sure looks inviting! Don't worry about the woolies for me, as long as there is an extra blanket. There! Now, we're all comfy from the winter's chill!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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This was a lighthearted take on the "November 5-7-5' contest. That cabin sure looks inviting! Don't worry about the woolies for me, as long as there is an extra blanket. There! Now, we're all comfy from the winter's chill!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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We are getting ready for the winter chill and hoping it?s not too severe. Here in NC it doesn?t get like my childhood Novembers in PA.
Thanks you Jim for the kind review.
Blessings
Janet .
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It is a little chilly but I still took my evening ride along the grounds
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A lovely take on this brief about November here! Your 5-7-5 skilfully evokes the chill of the month in each line, never needing to refer to 'cold' or 'chill' etc. Very well done! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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A lovely take on this brief about November here! Your 5-7-5 skilfully evokes the chill of the month in each line, never needing to refer to 'cold' or 'chill' etc. Very well done! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Thank you Debbie for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers will enjoy as I have. Good imagery.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers will enjoy as I have. Good imagery.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Thank you Alex for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Wendyanne
This is a nice little Autumn haiku style poem in which you have the contest word NOVEMBER. I like the onomatopoeic word "rattle" as it helps to describe the noise the windows are making in the wind. Good luck.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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This is a nice little Autumn haiku style poem in which you have the contest word NOVEMBER. I like the onomatopoeic word "rattle" as it helps to describe the noise the windows are making in the wind. Good luck.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2023
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Thank you for your encouraging review. You are the only one to notice and mention the onomatopoeic word "rattle".
Blessings
Janet
