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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I enjoyed reading this in the contest and agree with you. I can't imagine being a man. When I was in high school, there were no sports for women because it wasn't good for us. Now we have sports, but men are claiming to feel like females (I think frequently that is a lie, although I have a friend transitioning and that is fine because he isn't competing in anything) and proving their bodies are more competent at winning women's sports. How is that fair?
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
I enjoyed reading this in the contest and agree with you. I can't imagine being a man. When I was in high school, there were no sports for women because it wasn't good for us. Now we have sports, but men are claiming to feel like females (I think frequently that is a lie, although I have a friend transitioning and that is fine because he isn't competing in anything) and proving their bodies are more competent at winning women's sports. How is that fair?
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Carol..I know what you.are saying. The world is a crazy place. Ull:)))
Comment from Lisasview
I found your writing for the Being Female an interesting read....
Loads to think about...
You are right men do suppress women because they tend to be afraid of them... How sad is that!!!
Lisasview
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
I found your writing for the Being Female an interesting read....
Loads to think about...
You are right men do suppress women because they tend to be afraid of them... How sad is that!!!
Lisasview
Comment Written 08-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Hi Lisa, It is sad, isn't it? I'm glad it made you think. Thank you so much for the great review. :)))
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You are so welcome
Comment from Lea Tonin1
That's very good, and he makes a very valid points too I was accustomed to and less still do here in Canada. Hardly seems fair. Very well written by see no issues with Grammar punctuation sentence structure subject matter. "Amazing pay rise" did you mean to day raise?
This is a great submission good luck to you. I hope you have a great night!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
That's very good, and he makes a very valid points too I was accustomed to and less still do here in Canada. Hardly seems fair. Very well written by see no issues with Grammar punctuation sentence structure subject matter. "Amazing pay rise" did you mean to day raise?
This is a great submission good luck to you. I hope you have a great night!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Lea for a great review. No I meant 'pay rise'. As I wrote it was a lot of money. Thanks again, :)))
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Okay no problem thank you having awesome day!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers will enjoy as I have.
Best wishes,
Alexandra
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that readers will enjoy as I have.
Best wishes,
Alexandra
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Alexandra. I'm so glad you liked it. :)))
Comment from gramalot8
I loved your message. I am very happy being female and always have been.
I too have seen many changes in this world regarding the rights and equalities of women in my 75+ years.
Lately it seems like parts of the world where women were once considered lower in every aspect of men had started to change their thinking... only to have new leaders trying to suppress them again. It's kind of sad.
We are definitely blessed to live in a corner of the world where women are able to excerpt their rights... but, with that being said...especially in the workplace, there is still a need for improvement in equality of men vs women. Thanks for sharing this thought provoking message with us.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
I loved your message. I am very happy being female and always have been.
I too have seen many changes in this world regarding the rights and equalities of women in my 75+ years.
Lately it seems like parts of the world where women were once considered lower in every aspect of men had started to change their thinking... only to have new leaders trying to suppress them again. It's kind of sad.
We are definitely blessed to live in a corner of the world where women are able to excerpt their rights... but, with that being said...especially in the workplace, there is still a need for improvement in equality of men vs women. Thanks for sharing this thought provoking message with us.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2023
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Thank you so very much. I loved you review. Yes so much more could be done, but as you say, we are so lucky where wee live. Ulla;)))
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this 'Being a Female' contest entry with us. Yes, being a female is difficult, but it can be done. I agree, females are coming under attack in many societies. Good luck with this contest.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
Thank you for sharing this 'Being a Female' contest entry with us. Yes, being a female is difficult, but it can be done. I agree, females are coming under attack in many societies. Good luck with this contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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Thank you so very much, and for the well wishes. :)))
Comment from Sally Law
Thank you! I'm a woman and wouldn't want to be a man either. I love being a woman and carrying children. What a wonderful blessing to give birth and nurture my children. A wonderful entry for the prompt.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
Thank you! I'm a woman and wouldn't want to be a man either. I love being a woman and carrying children. What a wonderful blessing to give birth and nurture my children. A wonderful entry for the prompt.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally :))
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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Thank you so very much, Sally, and for your good wishes. I'm glad we're on the same page. Thanks again, :)))
Comment from Wendy G
You considered many aspects of the complexities of being a woman and did so with appreciation of where you are. Well written piece. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
You considered many aspects of the complexities of being a woman and did so with appreciation of where you are. Well written piece. Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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Thank you so much, Wendy. I so appreciate your review and comments. :)))
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Omg - I just wrote a long review for this story and my device glitched. I will not repeat it but raise my glass to you and all the natural women out there. A sound write and strong contender. Good luck.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
Omg - I just wrote a long review for this story and my device glitched. I will not repeat it but raise my glass to you and all the natural women out there. A sound write and strong contender. Good luck.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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Oh, I know what you mean. It has happened to me a few times over the years. Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I raise my glass to you as well. :)))
Comment from Claire Tennant
You should be proud of being a woman! You have cleverly pointed out the reasons why women are not equal in some places and are under threat because of the new age in the so-called modern societies. I remember days when women were not paid equally, This is a tale easily read, and a lesson to all. I wish you well in the contest. Like you, I would not want to be a man
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
You should be proud of being a woman! You have cleverly pointed out the reasons why women are not equal in some places and are under threat because of the new age in the so-called modern societies. I remember days when women were not paid equally, This is a tale easily read, and a lesson to all. I wish you well in the contest. Like you, I would not want to be a man
Comment Written 06-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2023
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Thank you so very much, Claire for a great review and comments. :)))
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most welcome
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you are welcome