Heaven is a Place
Thinking of those I miss.4 total reviews
Comment from Sarita Méndez
This poem is so touching and evocative. It summarizes how one feels after a loss, and your words are so true.
Thank you for sharing your text and good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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This poem is so touching and evocative. It summarizes how one feels after a loss, and your words are so true.
Thank you for sharing your text and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Thank you Sarita!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked your inventive words hers that could mean that we will only meet again in death, there is hope and sadness in these words for the contest, good luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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I liked your inventive words hers that could mean that we will only meet again in death, there is hope and sadness in these words for the contest, good luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
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Thank you Dolly.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good use of rhyme.
-Your heading about thinking of those you miss is appreciated
and adds to the meaning of the poem, as well as your author note.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good use of rhyme.
-Your heading about thinking of those you miss is appreciated
and adds to the meaning of the poem, as well as your author note.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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Thank you Pam
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You are welcome.
Comment from jim vecchio
Not only is God real, and Heaven is real, but I suspect both are in another time situation, or exist out of time as we know it, so i liked you use of "then" because if could refer to the future or the past. Interesting, because I just posted a work that spoke of seeing one's loved ones in Heven.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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Not only is God real, and Heaven is real, but I suspect both are in another time situation, or exist out of time as we know it, so i liked you use of "then" because if could refer to the future or the past. Interesting, because I just posted a work that spoke of seeing one's loved ones in Heven.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2023
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Thank you for reviewing. God Bless you
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And may The Lord send many Blessings to you!
