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Viewing comments for Chapter 169 "Baseball Then"
Thoughts from the dark side

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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This is excellent work. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in a readers.
Best wishes,
Alexandra

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2023
    Thanks. It should not have been up for viewing. I have a bit to go. There is a World Series to be played.
    Norm
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It sounds like you are huge baseball fan and know the game well and most Americans love the game, I enjoyed your post and your love of the game here, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2023
    Dolly, thanks. It was supposed to be in Prevue mode. I?m still writing it. I have to talk
    World Series wins and losses and being a kid. You are an amazing poet. Thanks again.