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Try to face facts
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Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
A really quite profound 5-7-9 verse enhanced by an image suggesting that we shouldn't be lured into seeing things as we would like to see them but, instead, see the reality of what lies beyond. Excellently done. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 18-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
Comment from
Mrs W
Very good advice in the 5/7/9 style of poetry! Reality hits hard when we wear those 'rose tinted glasses'! Well done and good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
Comment from
Nicki Nance
The message is profound. 'as they are' is usually someplace between your reality and mine. Your presentation is gorgeous! Thank you for being the poetic voice of reason.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023
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