Comment from Annmuma

Excellent

Always good to big the day with a smile! Well done and I could feel the connection between you and your grandson. A sweet, caring poem that should do well in the contest. Good luck. ann

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023

Thanks so much Ann

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Scarecrows with biceps are a bit worrying Laura, ha ha ha, you made me smile with this one, good luck with the contest, glad you had fun with your Grandson, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023

Thanks Dolly always appreciate your reviews.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, I can imagine the little one's enjoying this very much, a wonderful take of the sights on Halloween, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2023

Thank you Kahpot, I appreciate your kind review.

Comment from Lea Tonin1

Excellent

So cute! What a great poem for your grandson. Great time of year for kids too and I hope he has a good time!
That pictures just too cute as well! This is a fine poem a fine picture with lovely orange backdrop.
I see delicious with grammar, spelling punctuation sentence structure esthetics. Very good job find submission. I hope you have the greatest Halloween ever!

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023

Thank you so much I appreciate your review.

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Welcome back to FanStory, Laura! How are you? I enjoyed your delightful children's poem and just in time for Halloween.

Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023

Thank you, dear Sally, I have been thinking about you and wondering how things were in Florida, I have been looking at 55 plus mobile home parks and wondered where the safest place to visit is I just had my 70th birthday, and the cold winters are difficult. xo praying for Israel and peace God Bless Laura

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is a great Halloween children's poem which I enjoyed reading and I'm sure children will too. I love your rhyme of 'doorsteps' with 'biceps' though I'm not sure young children will understand the latter. Older children definitely would:) Your free verse seems to radiate colour, scariness and fun and, as such, is perfect for this contest. Good luck! Debbie

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023

Thank you Debbie. Your thoughtful review is appreciated.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think grandchildren are such a boon, and at two, they are very cute, and fortunately stay that way for awhile, until they become...cool. Beautifully written my friend, great kiddies poem, good luck, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023

Thanks so much!

reply by royowen on 16-Oct-2023

A pleasure