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Thoughts from the dark side

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Comment from prettybluebirds
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You sure say a mouthful with this writing. I found it a different sort of read, and I love how you compare hate and love throughout the poem. Good work.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 20-Oct-2023
    Thanks
Comment from r. xmas
Good
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your poem is a reflection on the relationship between religion, evil, and human actions. It raises important questions about the impact of beliefs on society and the potential for both good and evil within religious contexts. The repetition and dark imagery contribute to the poem's powerful and memorable tone.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2023
    Hi, I?ve posted well over 100 poems. This is my first four star. Try defining the emotion of hate into poetic verse. It is logic and emotion put together in a jigsaw puzzle of emotional hatred.