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Four Generations Of Love

Memories of lost loves ones' linger always.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This fifteen-syllable poem, Four Generations of Love, is a great example of the form bringing together the key feelings which embody the overall sentiment. Roots and a past work in our favor. Bless all those who have encouraged and led you to where you are now.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2023
    Thank you so much for reviewing and commenting on my poem
    It is very much appreciated.
    Kind regards.
Comment from Wendy G
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Beautiful notes and beautiful words in your poem. There is no greater blessing than to have such close relationships through the generations, plus her modelling of faith and wisdom. Well written. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
    Thanks so much for your review I so appreciate it
Comment from kiwisteveh
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Tricky stuff to get something meaningful crammed into fifteen syllables. I know, I have just entered my own piece in this contest. Yours focuses on family and in particular the generational aspect. Sounds like you are close and loving.

Steve

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2023


reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023
    Thank you for your review. Best of luck in the contest.