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Motherhood reflected.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
I actually love that image even though she is so sad. Your true story flash cleverly reflects that sadness and contrast from the days when there was so much activity, noise and life. I like your reference to that once longed for silence now over-saturating the present. This gives the impression that there is simply no opportunity for that bustle of life to return at the moment. Well said in such economic form. Good luck, Laine, Debbie
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023
Comment from
Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent story. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words and colorful imagery that draw in a reader. Many people will relate to this.
Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 19-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2023
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