Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is an excellent poem. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words that draw in a reader.

Best wishes!

Alexandra

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023

Thank you. I?m putting together a book of prose and poetry.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is a very different verse in praise of Fanstory and the imagination that flows from it. Your free verse expresses your sentiments clearly and well. There is a small edit - 3rd stanza - 'And.' Otherwise all good! Debbie

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2023

Thanks. I made the m an n. Im 80 and can?t see anymore.