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Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from
Isabel Fontes
I enjoyed reading this poem, especially the existential questioning of happiness.
The structure and flow of the poem are also well executed.
Formulating a good point of view successfully conveys it in your free verse.
I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
I just made a change to the poem. Wrong spacing and a superfluous word. Thanks to you too.
reply by Isabel Fontes on 15-Sep-2023
Comment from
JSD
Thoughtfully questioning eternal optimism. An interesting viewpoint, successfully conveyed in your free verse. I'm not entirely sure you divide your parts helpfully, but otherwise, well done.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
Well done to you too. I made a change. If I can figure out how to do it, I?ll nominate you.
reply by JSD on 15-Sep-2023
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