My Worst Fear ...
Standing Before the Bar of God17 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Yes, God knows everything we've done to include what's in our hearts. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest.
I thought, "it be best if I did not order a drink," ("It...)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Yes, God knows everything we've done to include what's in our hearts. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest.
I thought, "it be best if I did not order a drink," ("It...)
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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hahahha. You're nearly the card I am, me being a Joker and you ... let's see how about a queen? Thanks for reading My Worst Fear.
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So true.
Comment from royowen
A funny way of looking at the man that in justice, but also the man who deals in mercy equally, His plea is , I desire that none should perish but come to the evidence of the truth, well done, good luck, Tom blessings Roy
Typo : I (pled) the fifth. Pleaded?
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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A funny way of looking at the man that in justice, but also the man who deals in mercy equally, His plea is , I desire that none should perish but come to the evidence of the truth, well done, good luck, Tom blessings Roy
Typo : I (pled) the fifth. Pleaded?
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2024
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I may be waiting at the depot for a local
The express keeps passing me by
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Just ask
Comment from Douglas Goff
Okay, I did not know the word Edenic and I am still not sure it is a real word.
This was another one that needed a number fifteen rating, so here it is.
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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
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Okay, I did not know the word Edenic and I am still not sure it is a real word.
This was another one that needed a number fifteen rating, so here it is.
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Comment Written 09-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2023
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Edenic to me means living in paradise like Adam and Eve before they partook of the fruit.
😎
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, yes, all our doings will never be forgotten by our final judge, and even if we think we cannot undo any of our misgivings we do know that we will be forgiven, very well written, it does make one look at themselves****kahpot
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Excellent, yes, all our doings will never be forgotten by our final judge, and even if we think we cannot undo any of our misgivings we do know that we will be forgiven, very well written, it does make one look at themselves****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Sep-2023
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent story. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good. You also use descriptive words, well, that draw in a reader. I'm sure many readers will relate to this. Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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This is an excellent story. I enjoyed reading it. Your presentation is very good. You also use descriptive words, well, that draw in a reader. I'm sure many readers will relate to this. Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 13-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2023
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Thanks. You are appreciated.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I hate to admit it, but there are many things that I've never bothered to journal, and about as many that I'd just as soon forget, or hope no one else remembers. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Well, I hate to admit it, but there are many things that I've never bothered to journal, and about as many that I'd just as soon forget, or hope no one else remembers. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2023
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Temporarily forgotten but I sense we will recall all our lives. The high and lows. Who can keep a journal more complete than a restored mind post- mortality.
Comment from Wendy G
Fortunately, if we confess our sins, He is faithful and just to cleanse us from ALL unrighteousness. His sacrifice for our sins was sufficient. Nothing we can do is needed, to add to what He's already done, once and for all. An interesting post, but we don't need to fear if we are trusting in Him, not ourselves. I wish you well for the contest.
Wendy
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Fortunately, if we confess our sins, He is faithful and just to cleanse us from ALL unrighteousness. His sacrifice for our sins was sufficient. Nothing we can do is needed, to add to what He's already done, once and for all. An interesting post, but we don't need to fear if we are trusting in Him, not ourselves. I wish you well for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Great idea and great execution. The storyline is well thought of and quite humorous too.
Great contest entry. Did you title it "worse" deliberately or should it be " worst"?
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Great idea and great execution. The storyline is well thought of and quite humorous too.
Great contest entry. Did you title it "worse" deliberately or should it be " worst"?
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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You got me!
Worst it will become.
Thanks.
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Sorry Tom,
I was absent from FS for quite a while...
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A typical Tom story - brilliant, engaging, and imaginative. It is excellent, with strong imagery and a moralistic message. When we realize our actions have consequences, it may be too late.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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A typical Tom story - brilliant, engaging, and imaginative. It is excellent, with strong imagery and a moralistic message. When we realize our actions have consequences, it may be too late.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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You are my favorite reviewer! 😋
Comment from jmdg1954
Hmph... I never thought of it like this, Tom. I'd better ask God for forgiveness now while I have time and clean up my act fore it's too late.
Well worded and making us accountable.
Stay away from trouble.
John
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Hmph... I never thought of it like this, Tom. I'd better ask God for forgiveness now while I have time and clean up my act fore it's too late.
Well worded and making us accountable.
Stay away from trouble.
John
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Better to be sooner than later. I should have listened to my elders earlier. Now I have to wait for the parole board to have my case examined.
