Comment from Bryce 1

Excellent

This is just brilliant. I love the words you have used, they are creatively spot on and spiritual. It makes me think the muse is always out there if only I remember to listen.

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023

Thank you for your time and review.

Have a great weekend

Comment from Eleri

Excellent

This poem paints a beautiful picture and I do like it. However, I think that I would have either made all three lines rhyme or had no rhyme at all. It just sounds a bit odd to me with two rhyming lines after one non-rhyming one.
Eleri

 Comment Written 09-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2023

Thank you for your feedback.

Have a great weekend!

Comment from Katie Mae Dead

Excellent

Really liking this K.L. You've done a great job with the prompt.
My favorite line is...

through clouds of rose she soars ~ her brilliance never peaks,
a chanting breeze floats by ~ to my soul she speaks.
Like the subtle hint of rhyme here.
Good work!
Katiemaedead

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2023

Thanks for the great review, Katie.

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

That's an incredible picture which looks too pretty to be a real photo. You have also written a poem with a wealth of images and a thoughtful muse perched atop your shoulder.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023

Thanks for the kind review:)

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Thank you for mentioning me and the club in your notes. I'm have you joined this week's event.

I love that you chose nature as your topic. It's the perfect theme for Japanese poetry.

Well done! It's a beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023

Thanks for the review, Gypsy.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Beautiful artwork and nice presentation, K.L.
-You wrote a very good poem to go with it.
-I like the style you chose and the imagery
creates a beautiful word picture in each verse.
-You create a peaceful mood with "clouds of rose"
and "a chanting breeze floats by."
-A lovely tribute to your muse and your poetry.
-Thanks for sharing it.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023

Thank you, Pam.

reply by Pam (respa) on 06-Sep-2023

You are welcome!

Comment from JSD

Excellent

What a lovely picture and I can see why it inspired you to write. I like the last line most of all, with the metaphor of chanting and speaks. The femininity you apply to it also works well. Great stuff.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023

Thank you for your time and review.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You found your muse here and you added a touch of magic to a cloud by using the word (rose) here, and you brought a wonderful scene of colourful skies too, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023

Thanks so much, Dolly.

Comment from Cindy Decker 2

Exceptional

Katherine,
Your lighter-than-air, weighty poem describes a beautiful muse, full of purpose and brilliance.
The words of your poem are soft and powerful.
Exceptional work.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2023

Thank you, Cindy.

I appreciate your time and kind review.

Kitty is just a nickname, not short for Katherine:)

reply by Cindy Decker 2 on 06-Sep-2023

You?re welcome, Kitty. Sorry about the name mix-up.
Your poem was beautiful. It struck the right chords with me and other readers, I?m sure.

Blessings,
Cindy

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Well, you've certainly found your muse with this beautiful short poem. It's stunning really and perfectly illustrated.

Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the challenge.
Sally xoxo

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023

Thanks, Sally.

reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023

Thanks, Sally.

reply by the author on 05-Sep-2023

Thanks, Sally.