I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 90 "Life Cycle "Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Your cycle of life has been expressed in a very original and unusually readable way. Almost like a philosophical approach delving into the different stages. I question - Egos exist in emotions called logic - not my view but still. And there is a small edit below this - (that) freaks. But interesting and thank you for sharing! Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Your cycle of life has been expressed in a very original and unusually readable way. Almost like a philosophical approach delving into the different stages. I question - Egos exist in emotions called logic - not my view but still. And there is a small edit below this - (that) freaks. But interesting and thank you for sharing! Debbie
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2023
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Emotional Logic is different than pure logic. Thanks
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I truly enjoyed reading your work. It's an excellent poem and presentation! You've used imagery and specific words that draw in a reader. Your use of Best wishes! Alexandra
A note:
Probably you could raise the empty space at the bottom
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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I truly enjoyed reading your work. It's an excellent poem and presentation! You've used imagery and specific words that draw in a reader. Your use of Best wishes! Alexandra
A note:
Probably you could raise the empty space at the bottom
Comment Written 24-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
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There was a floating e
Thank for liking the poem
