Gone with the wind
soulmate19 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
Some people are like rolling stones. They nerver stay anywhere for long. They are contsantly on the move searching for something they don't have. They leave broken hearts behind but some times they meet someone they want and find them gone leaving them with a broken heart..
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Some people are like rolling stones. They nerver stay anywhere for long. They are contsantly on the move searching for something they don't have. They leave broken hearts behind but some times they meet someone they want and find them gone leaving them with a broken heart..
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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I might be one of those:)
Comment from Ulla
Wow, Iza, this goes deep into some dark soul searching. I liked it a lot. I believe most of us have been looking for that soulmate but never really found it. All the best of luck. Ulla :)))
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Wow, Iza, this goes deep into some dark soul searching. I liked it a lot. I believe most of us have been looking for that soulmate but never really found it. All the best of luck. Ulla :)))
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much, Ulla I really appreciate your review:) since you are one of my favorite authors here on the site.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Absolute perfection. If I had written it myself, I could not have been this good.
I am glad we are fanned so I don't miss a lick.Great great work here. You crept up on me. Pulled me in with longing. I wanted to know if the man died of longing for this woman. Then to be gobsmacked with it being the sun and moon. Such mastery I swear. I worship at your feet. Karen
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Absolute perfection. If I had written it myself, I could not have been this good.
I am glad we are fanned so I don't miss a lick.Great great work here. You crept up on me. Pulled me in with longing. I wanted to know if the man died of longing for this woman. Then to be gobsmacked with it being the sun and moon. Such mastery I swear. I worship at your feet. Karen
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much Karen:) I was musing with this expression gone with the wind, and from there I had no idea where I will land:) I am happy that we fan each other too:)
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You do good work. But, this was beyond special. Really.
Karen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Truism?
So, we mate with 'alike' people and then our soulmate (Gone With the Wind) reappears, blown in unexpectedly?
Gone with the wind, returned with the storm. - I don't think you need this comma.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Truism?
So, we mate with 'alike' people and then our soulmate (Gone With the Wind) reappears, blown in unexpectedly?
Gone with the wind, returned with the storm. - I don't think you need this comma.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thanks Wayne:) still your number one for that Ben character:)
Comment from LJbutterfly
How sad it is, he saw her, fell in love, longed for more, and was gone. How sad when we mate with disappointing people and before we know it, they are "Gone with the Wind." As your story says, "What a tragedy." Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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How sad it is, he saw her, fell in love, longed for more, and was gone. How sad when we mate with disappointing people and before we know it, they are "Gone with the Wind." As your story says, "What a tragedy." Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Aww that's a sad one, Iza! A tragedy indeed! A love that was lost in the wind. Mind you she does have stunning eyes so she could afford to be choosy. And now he must settle, perhaps, for second best like so many of us. As ever, a stunningly thought-provoking story from your inventive pen. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Aww that's a sad one, Iza! A tragedy indeed! A love that was lost in the wind. Mind you she does have stunning eyes so she could afford to be choosy. And now he must settle, perhaps, for second best like so many of us. As ever, a stunningly thought-provoking story from your inventive pen. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much Debbie:) of course is me that lousy character with beautiful eyes:) I know such a vanity:)
Comment from lyenochka
This traveler is truly a romantic as he knew nothing about that woman except that first impression. It's too bad he believed only his feelings as real love has to be tested through living and forgiving on a daily basis.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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This traveler is truly a romantic as he knew nothing about that woman except that first impression. It's too bad he believed only his feelings as real love has to be tested through living and forgiving on a daily basis.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much, Hellen
Comment from JSD
Ooh, that's a bit dark Iza! 'Brief as the lightning', as Juliet said. A fascinating little piece, most unlike your usual stuff. Really mysterious and enjoyable. Well done and good luck.
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Ooh, that's a bit dark Iza! 'Brief as the lightning', as Juliet said. A fascinating little piece, most unlike your usual stuff. Really mysterious and enjoyable. Well done and good luck.
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review:)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this flash fiction contest entry with us. It was interesting to read. I wonder how many people never meet their soulmate and settle. I have a feeling more than we care to admit. Good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you for sharing this flash fiction contest entry with us. It was interesting to read. I wonder how many people never meet their soulmate and settle. I have a feeling more than we care to admit. Good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 21-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Yup, I wonder too, and also, I wonder how would the heck you would know? :)
