Gone with the wind
soulmate19 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent story. I enjoyed reading it. Many readers will relate to this.Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words that draw in a reader. Best wishes!
Alexandra
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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This is an excellent story. I enjoyed reading it. Many readers will relate to this.Your presentation is very good, too. You also use descriptive words that draw in a reader. Best wishes!
Alexandra
Comment Written 17-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much, Alexandra.
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-fifty-word flash fiction story, Gone with the Wind, seems to be comparing the two cosmic items in our solar system both close and far, with that relationship that never seems to arrive.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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This one-hundred-fifty-word flash fiction story, Gone with the Wind, seems to be comparing the two cosmic items in our solar system both close and far, with that relationship that never seems to arrive.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much for your insightful review.
Comment from jim vecchio
This was a great piece of flash fiction, but a sad commentary on love lost, if it really was love. your words are a Treasure, and you are a treasure, and I hope you will be, or are, blessed with a True Love!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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This was a great piece of flash fiction, but a sad commentary on love lost, if it really was love. your words are a Treasure, and you are a treasure, and I hope you will be, or are, blessed with a True Love!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much.... I think my true love is God:) there is nothing left for me here...
Comment from karenina
Imaginative Flash Fiction! Two people--never destined to become one in this lifetime. It is a story as old as time itself, I think. It's thought-provoking how we sometimes "settle" for what is before us when we know our heart is truly not in it!
Karenina
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Imaginative Flash Fiction! Two people--never destined to become one in this lifetime. It is a story as old as time itself, I think. It's thought-provoking how we sometimes "settle" for what is before us when we know our heart is truly not in it!
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much for your insightful review.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Terry Broxson
Iza, this is a nicely constructed flash fiction. I wish you well in the contest. I wasn't sure where you were headed. The moon and the sun were well done. The last paragraph provided a thoughtful message. Excellent. Terry.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Iza, this is a nicely constructed flash fiction. I wish you well in the contest. I wasn't sure where you were headed. The moon and the sun were well done. The last paragraph provided a thoughtful message. Excellent. Terry.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much for your insightful review.
Comment from estory
This is actually a very romantic post, capturing that feeling of the imperfections of love and life. It speaks to the fact that people today are so infactuated with looks, spellbound by the eyes, almost hypnotized, but miss the real point of love. Which is to start a family and have children. The search seems never ending today...estory
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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This is actually a very romantic post, capturing that feeling of the imperfections of love and life. It speaks to the fact that people today are so infactuated with looks, spellbound by the eyes, almost hypnotized, but miss the real point of love. Which is to start a family and have children. The search seems never ending today...estory
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much for your insightful review.
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning Iza, from already getting early morning here in Spain,
There is something about this poem that pulled me in and made me want to read it several times.
It seemed that all was great but then the ending was rather sad.
I love your choice of the image and the font and size of the font made your poem nice and easy to read.
Loved it,
Lisa
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Good morning Iza, from already getting early morning here in Spain,
There is something about this poem that pulled me in and made me want to read it several times.
It seemed that all was great but then the ending was rather sad.
I love your choice of the image and the font and size of the font made your poem nice and easy to read.
Loved it,
Lisa
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2023
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Thank you so much Lisa, and so sorry for my delay:)
Comment from Liz O'Neill
There's a good solid plot being established here: "Then, love, at first sight, struck him." Many of us could identify with the obsession of one of our crushes: "he searched for her under every leaf and rock, but she was long gone." This is a strong cautionary tale. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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There's a good solid plot being established here: "Then, love, at first sight, struck him." Many of us could identify with the obsession of one of our crushes: "he searched for her under every leaf and rock, but she was long gone." This is a strong cautionary tale. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much Liz:)
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Well done
Comment from Ric Myworld
There is a whole lot of truth in this story. People spend a lifetime searching for that one special love, while most end up settling: for money, comfort, or kindness. But it never fulfills the emptiness or desires. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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There is a whole lot of truth in this story. People spend a lifetime searching for that one special love, while most end up settling: for money, comfort, or kindness. But it never fulfills the emptiness or desires. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Thank you so much Ric for your insightful review.
Comment from Thesis
Was it infatuation or longing for a soulmate? I've often asked that question when confronted with a scene like this. I can understand both outcomes. The way you described the encounter is passionate in a way most people would fantasize about a relationship, but like your characters, they too are left unfulfilled.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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Was it infatuation or longing for a soulmate? I've often asked that question when confronted with a scene like this. I can understand both outcomes. The way you described the encounter is passionate in a way most people would fantasize about a relationship, but like your characters, they too are left unfulfilled.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2023
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You are right on both counts.
