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Pools of Love

The death of Jesus

4 total reviews 
Comment from Kaiku
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Very nice Penofire. It isn't easy to lay words upon the parchment that offers anything different from what ages have continued to offer when it comes to He who carried the cross. The line you offered, 'great pools of love' ... was awesome.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2023

Comment from Teri7
Excellent
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Amen! This is a very beautiful and very true Spiritual poem you have penned about our Lord, Jesus and how He gives us eternal hope if we receive Him. I am so thankful I have Him inside me! Best wishes in the writing prompt contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2023

Comment from jim vecchio
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You told the story of Christ's death so poetically! Thank God, the story does not end there! Now we have the Hope we need! Even though we murdered His Son, God still calls out to us.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
    Thank you, Jim, for the six-star review. Our sin sent Him to His death, but this was God's perfect plan. Such great love is hard to understand.
    May the Lord bless you greatly, Pen
reply by jim vecchio on 14-Aug-2023
    I am so thankful The Lord did not give up on us!
Comment from John Alvin1
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What a great reminder of how God loved us, to sacrifice his son so that we would have eternal life. An amazing two events of death and resurrection. Thanks for writing about it.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2023
    I thank you, John, for taking the time to review my work.

    May the Lord bless you greatly, Pen