The Chaos Within
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Re-Introduction"Follow the main character in her journey.
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Comment from JT traveller
Vivid imagery created. I appreciate your imaginative dialogue. The first paragraph is both descriptive and engaging and sets the scene well. A beautiful lly written piece. Thank you.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Vivid imagery created. I appreciate your imaginative dialogue. The first paragraph is both descriptive and engaging and sets the scene well. A beautiful lly written piece. Thank you.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read my work and for the kind review!
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My pleasure ☺️
Comment from Nina Sexton
I was wondering if this book has been published yet. It's nicely written and pushes forward leaving you wanting more, but I do wish for the chapters to be longer. Nice work.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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I was wondering if this book has been published yet. It's nicely written and pushes forward leaving you wanting more, but I do wish for the chapters to be longer. Nice work.
Comment Written 12-Aug-2023
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2023
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Thank you for reading my work. I've purposely made the chapters shorter with this piece as in the past I received negative reviews stating that they felt the chapters were too long for this site. Originally this one was doubled in size and I broke it apart into smaller installments for the sake of posting on here.
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That makes sense. Have you tried entering chapters into other contests on sites like Bardsy, Vocal.media or other anthologies? You may get more traction there. Here's a link to a contest going on right now at
https://vocal.media/challenges/next-great-american-novel
Let me know what you think. Good luck.
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I haven't! But I'll have to look into it. Thank you!!
