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Comment from Loren .
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I thoroughly enjoyed this morning walk with you and Tasha. I could visualize everything. Thank you for taking me along. I didn't find it banal at all. Now, to enjoy those pears, but they did sound a bit too green at the moment. Loren

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2023
    Oh, thank you so much, Loren..They are delicious. I keep them in the fridge and they are as fresh and sweet as on the day I got them. The green colour is what they look like..Ulla,:)))
Comment from Bill Schott
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This piece, An Unexpected Gesture, is a neat slice of life that helps us all remember that people are very nice and want to do good things for each other when they can. That bag of pears says a lot.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 06-Aug-2023
    Thank you so much, Bill. Yes those pears say a lot. I'm still eating them. They are delicious. Ulla:)))
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent contribution to the women writers club. You reminded me of how friendly Spanish people are. I can imagine a bag full of pears..yum!

Gypsy hugs

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023
    Thank you so much, Marival. I'm still.eating them. They are delicious. Un abrazo, Ulla xx
Comment from BethShelby
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That was a lovely gesture. You have a thoughtful neighbor and I'm glad you shared this little story with is. When you talk about how beautiful the area where you live is, it make me wish I was able to travel to all these places. My own area is beautiful too, but probably in a different way. Friendship is so special. I am touched too when other show me they care by doing something like your neighbor did.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2023
    Yes, it was a wonderful gesture, and so unexpected. That's what makes it extra special. Yes, friendship like that is invaluable. Ulla xcx
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Actually, it is one of life's great moments and memories. It was a simple pleasure as is the name of the contest you entered it in. How often do we see something very lovely and then get gifted with it personally?

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
    Exactly. Thank you so much, Carol. It was such a lovely gesture. Ulla:)))
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, the unexpected simple acts of kindness are the best ones. I am so happy this happened for you. I am also happy you shared it with us as a club entry. You're right it makes a good story.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
    I couldn't agree more. Thank you so much. Ulla:)))
Comment from Paul McFarland
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This used to be quite common in our rural neighborhood, but today we barely know our neighbors, let alone exchanging fruits and vegetables. I don't know how to bring back the good old days.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
    Thank you so much, Paul. We have just that and it's a very Spanish thing to do in rural areas. We basically look after each other. I hope it will stay that way. Ulla;)))
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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I agree. It was a very sweet gesture.
Some people are just naturally generous
and love to share what they have to give.
Thank you for sharing the story with us, Ulla.
Nancy:)

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
    Thank you so much. You're so right. People are like that here in rural Spain. I hope it'll never change. Ulla xcx
Comment from estory
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It just goes to show that engagement is the path to relationships, and relationships are the path to gifts of the spirit, as well as the land. We used to have a bartlett pear tree in our yard in New York and I used to love those pears. But it was full of yellow jacket wasps a lot too....estory

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
    Thank.you so much, estory. I hope the tradition of sharing what we have will never die out in rural Spain. No-one has ever gone hungry throughout history here because our neighbours will always look out for us and provide. Nay that never change. Thanks for a lovely review. Ulla:)))
Comment from Pam (respa)
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You did a good job with the story, Ulla. The descriptive detail is very good, and the Spanish dialogue adds to it very well. It is like we are there, sharing in this experience as you are taking a walk with your dog and enjoying the sites you see.

The pears sound amazing and to see them ripened in their natural environment is priceless. It sounds like you didn't know your neighbors owned this land. It was a lovely gesture to give you the bag of lovely pears, and I can understand how you would appreciate it so much. It isn't the norm these days, but from all you have written, you live in a lovely place where people care and interact with one another. Thanks for sharing it.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2023
    Thank you so very much Pam. Natalia's gesture was such a lovely surprise. I'm still enjoying using a pear with my meal every day. I keep them in my fridge so they won't go off. They add such sweetness with my veg and salad. Ullaxx
reply by Pam (respa) on 03-Aug-2023
    You are very welcome, Ulla. Thanks for sharing about them. They sound delicious!!