Comment from Laurie Holding

Exceptional

Well, this was an easy one for voters. This IS just about a perfect little piece, and you should be proud no matter what place you take. It almost brought tears to my eyes, but at the same time I was chuckling. That's hard to do even when you're allowed infinite words. So you should be proud of this one! good luck!

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Thank you so much. I had to be six again to write this.hahaha

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

This is terrific. You definitely captured the Child's Wishful Thinking syndrome to perfection. (Are you sure you're old enough to be on this site?.....)

My favorite one is "ice cream for breakfast."

Good luck in the contest. If children were allowed to vote, you know you'd be first with no close seconds. Grown-ups, though, aren't as smart.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

Hahaha. I will hope for children of six to join fanstory. Thank you so much.

reply by Rachelle Allen on 20-Jul-2023

HAHAHA. Yeah! Then YOU could be the person with the most children voting for them!! There'd be a new sheriff in town THEN!!

Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

This would be a perfect world!
I found this Nonet to be delightful and a wish list we all would love to see.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2023

We can only dream! Thank you for your encouragement.

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao mystery poet!

A cute entry

Cats and dogs never die ... totally agree.

The : unicorns live next door line , made me laugh.

PS: I believe Jesus is two syllables.. you could put God!

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023

Thanks .correction made.

reply by tempeste on 21-Jul-2023

Ciao ! You now have 8 votes🙂
Best of luck ! 🍀

Comment from Paul Manton

Excellent

Dear Nonet writer.
For once, I'm giving a short review!
You will be disqualified! Horrors - because, even though I love the whole thing, Jesus has two syllables! Maybe 'God' is your only choice?
But if you're happy with that, I have my hand up to be adopted by your family - soon as you like!
A great idea. Should be a national imperative.
Paul

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023

Correction made. I must think of Jesus never needing to fit any rules. Hahahah

reply by Paul Manton on 18-Jul-2023

Yes, I thought something like that too.
Good luck in the comp.
Best wishes, Paul

Comment from RodG

Excellent

What a day brightener this is! This Nonet will definitely appeal to readers of all ages. Who doesn't want a shorter work week, unicorns living next door, and ice cream for breakfast? Delightful! Rod

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023

Thanks Rod. I'm so glad you liked it. We can dream right?