Comment from Theresa Honnigford

Exceptional

Wonderful Kahpot. I love the story in the acrostic. I looked at it as a love story and not as a religious work, so I am unsure how the imagery fits here. Overall excellent. Thanks, Theresa

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2023

Thank you, Theresa, yes, it was a story about love, though a love lost, I guess I was trying to say that she was now in heaven, re. the artwork, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

reply by Theresa Honnigford on 17-Jul-2023

thanks Kahpot for the explanation.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Cancer is the most hideous of diseases that the powers of darkness have ever conceived, all sickness is of the evil forces of the wicked one. There is no sickness in Heaven, only wholeness, this is superbly written Kim, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023

Thank you Roy, for your understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

reply by royowen on 16-Jul-2023

Most welcome

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

So sorry for your departed loved one, Kaput. Please accept my sincerest condolences. I certainly know about that loss many times over.

Beautifully penned and illustrated acrostic, tender too. I felt this deeply.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023

Thank you, Sally, for your wonderful comments, though please note the loss was for a loved one of s friend, your wishes are most welcome, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Such an impactful acrostic poem here. Your cadence is good and an adept use of rhyme carries along a theme of not ready, but cancer has its own course of action.

Just a couple of typos:

Not yet ready for journeys (journey's) start

Unyeilding (Unyielding) to the needs above

Very well done, kahpot and many thanks for sharing. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023

Thank you so very much, Gloria, for your wonderful comments and help, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from CrystieCookie999

Excellent

I liked reading this poem. It is definitely an acrostic poem. Cancer is a hard subject to write about. So hard, in fact, that I've only written two poems in 30 years about it. Favorite line was: Dreams remain as memories form
Only one suggestion on the last line, maybe try:
Every day since you said goodbye.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023

Thank you for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Very moving and quite sad, as final good-byes are never easy. And cancer is a cruel and savage illnes. My own brother-in-law died from it just last Saturday. I see the grief and pain of separation, and the loneliness of being left behind. Well written acrostic!
Wendy

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023

Thank you so very much, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did an excellent job with your acrostic, Kahpot.
Your words were well thought out though poignant.
The rhymes were an added bonus--many acrostics
seem more like a list. However, your told a story of lost
love and hope still held on to by the man. I'm sorry
for the loss of his beloved wife. The image was a perfect
fit.
Thanks for sharing and caring, Jan

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023

Thank you, Jan, I am so glad that picked up that I was trying to write a story as well, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are heartfelt and presented with emotions and love. This poem gives a detailed account of what a love one goes through
when someone is dying. Thank you for the author's notes. The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork is lovely and goes well with the
words and theme of this poem. Have a great weekend!....Maria

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023

Thank you Maria, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

A sad poem. One I can identify with.

Excellent acrostic poem. You grasped the form well.  Nice  presentation.  Your descriptive words flow well expressing clear  mental imagery.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." -  Atticus

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023

Thank you, Marival, for your encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very well written acrostic, and you have presented it beautifully. It was a pleasure to listen to and watch long as it was being really loud to me. I am in rehab because I broke a couple bones in my body. It's gonna be a while before I'll be out of the rehab. Patricia.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023

Thank you Patricia, for your wonderful comments, I hope you are well, and recovering, as always very much appreciated****kahpot