The Piper
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Comment from JSD
Perfectly judged Tolkeinian prose. Your atmosphere and tone are spot on. The narrative is pacy and engaging, characterisation convincing and dialogue authentic. Well done.
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Perfectly judged Tolkeinian prose. Your atmosphere and tone are spot on. The narrative is pacy and engaging, characterisation convincing and dialogue authentic. Well done.
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Hi JSD.
Thank you for the wonderful review to encourage me to continue. I appreciate the specifics of the review.
Debi
Comment from Paul Manton
Hello again wjdebi, As we are now at chapter 51, I must assume that this story has flocks of loyal fans - a bit like (60 years ago) Flash Gordon at Saturday Morning Cinema in the UK.
I will never be able to catch up with your super-fans, but I have enjoyed everything I've read so far. The characters, and especially Piper are really engaging, so much that we can identify with him and several of the others. the biggest problem with Chapter systems is that sometimes nothing happens, and we would like more action; this was the case here, but the dialogue was so well done that I was never bored.
I look forward to the next episode.
Paul
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Hello again wjdebi, As we are now at chapter 51, I must assume that this story has flocks of loyal fans - a bit like (60 years ago) Flash Gordon at Saturday Morning Cinema in the UK.
I will never be able to catch up with your super-fans, but I have enjoyed everything I've read so far. The characters, and especially Piper are really engaging, so much that we can identify with him and several of the others. the biggest problem with Chapter systems is that sometimes nothing happens, and we would like more action; this was the case here, but the dialogue was so well done that I was never bored.
I look forward to the next episode.
Paul
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Comment Written 25-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Hi Paul,
Thank you for a great review and for stopping by again. I don't blame you for not catching up. I am delighted you took a chance on chapters 50 and 51. I appreciate the kind comments about the characters.
This chapter is tying up some loose ends as we draw to a close. The final chapter will follow, probably next week.
Thanks again for taking a chance on this one.
Debi
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You're welcome.
Not a chance. A sure bet.
Paul
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You are so kind. Thank you!
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Welcome.
