A Compilation of Short stories
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Comment from Andrea Kepple
Thank you for sharing your story with us. I like how you start by asking questions. It mimics what I would expect from a child as they begin to explore their world. Not that level of questions, just the act of asking question after question after question. I love how you are able to bring the images into my mind through your word choices.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Thank you for sharing your story with us. I like how you start by asking questions. It mimics what I would expect from a child as they begin to explore their world. Not that level of questions, just the act of asking question after question after question. I love how you are able to bring the images into my mind through your word choices.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2023
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Thank you so very much, Andrea.. I'm thrilled that you liked it..Ulla:)))
Comment from lancellot
Yes, you were both chosen and blessed. Good things do happen in this world. Love is alive and well.
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Today, I believe a child that young would be aware of something fundamental being amiss when growing up in an orphanage. The same child would also be deprived of what only a pair of loving parents would be able to provide.
-Isn't it more likely that child would only know, if they had a frame of reference to compare?
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023
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Yes, you were both chosen and blessed. Good things do happen in this world. Love is alive and well.
note:
Today, I believe a child that young would be aware of something fundamental being amiss when growing up in an orphanage. The same child would also be deprived of what only a pair of loving parents would be able to provide.
-Isn't it more likely that child would only know, if they had a frame of reference to compare?
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2023
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Thank you so very much. I so appreciate your lovely review. Ulla:)))
Comment from Mario PIERRE
What a powerful testimony, Ulla!! First of all, your life story must have had many challenges, and you recount it with much tenderness and nostalgia. Secondly, you write beautifully, and the reader never gets bored.
I love your style.
*** BTW, I VOTED FOR YOU JUST NOW
Mario
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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What a powerful testimony, Ulla!! First of all, your life story must have had many challenges, and you recount it with much tenderness and nostalgia. Secondly, you write beautifully, and the reader never gets bored.
I love your style.
*** BTW, I VOTED FOR YOU JUST NOW
Mario
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much, Mario. I'm glad you liked it. Also congratulations on your win. Well deserved. Ulla:)))
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Thank you Ulla!!!
Comment from LisaMay
As an adopted person myself, I identified with your story, although I was lucky to be adopted as a baby. You describe your memories well - the boots and Bammy being very symbolic of love and connection.
How intriguing to find you were half American.
I felt I was lucky and had 'hit the jackpot' with my adoptive parents, as you did.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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As an adopted person myself, I identified with your story, although I was lucky to be adopted as a baby. You describe your memories well - the boots and Bammy being very symbolic of love and connection.
How intriguing to find you were half American.
I felt I was lucky and had 'hit the jackpot' with my adoptive parents, as you did.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much LisaMay. I can so identify with what you're saying. Ulla:)))
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is beyond exceptional, Ulla! Drats thst you are my very worthy of winning, "competition."
You have written well and you are blessed to have traveled much. Half of an American I've never thought of American as a nationality.I was born in and have only lived in America and we are from everywhere but YOU ARE RIGHT American is a nationality finally? lol
Beautiful writing, Homie!! Alexandra xx
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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This is beyond exceptional, Ulla! Drats thst you are my very worthy of winning, "competition."
You have written well and you are blessed to have traveled much. Half of an American I've never thought of American as a nationality.I was born in and have only lived in America and we are from everywhere but YOU ARE RIGHT American is a nationality finally? lol
Beautiful writing, Homie!! Alexandra xx
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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You Know, this is one of the sweetest reviews I've eve received.!! Thank you so much, Alexandra. Yes, American is definitely a nationality. Ulla xcx
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lol xoxo
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Ulla,
Yours is a beautiful and unforgettable true story.
I read a book, entitled, "The Family Nobody Wanted," a true story about a couple who wants children, and they end up adopting several. It has sad and funny moments; I just thought you would like it because it's about adoption.
Good luck with your exceptional story.
Cindy
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Ulla,
Yours is a beautiful and unforgettable true story.
I read a book, entitled, "The Family Nobody Wanted," a true story about a couple who wants children, and they end up adopting several. It has sad and funny moments; I just thought you would like it because it's about adoption.
Good luck with your exceptional story.
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much, Cindy, and for the exceptional stars. I will look up that book. I would love to read it. Thank you so much again. Ulla xc
Comment from w.j.debi
This tugs at the heart-strings. How wonderful to be chosen and become part of a loving family. You set it up well with all the things you didn't realize you didn't have until those boots came into your life. The first thing that was truly a possession to call your own. I'm glad you've kept them of a symbol of belonging and being cherished.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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This tugs at the heart-strings. How wonderful to be chosen and become part of a loving family. You set it up well with all the things you didn't realize you didn't have until those boots came into your life. The first thing that was truly a possession to call your own. I'm glad you've kept them of a symbol of belonging and being cherished.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you so very much, Debi... Yes, the impact of those boots , I will never forget. They spelled the change to my whole life. Thank you so much for a great review. Ulla:)))
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You are welcome
Pam mentioned that your brother had a heart attack and will need surgery. Including you and him in my prayers.
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Thank you so very much! It means a lorto me xxx
Comment from JT traveller
A heart warming story. I have no memories from that age so I'd say you are lucky. You were chosen.
Beautiful words which reflect your character and understanding of the intention of your adoptive parents l.
Thank you for sharing,
Jacqueline
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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A heart warming story. I have no memories from that age so I'd say you are lucky. You were chosen.
Beautiful words which reflect your character and understanding of the intention of your adoptive parents l.
Thank you for sharing,
Jacqueline
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much, Jacqueline. Those boots made such an impression. It's imbued in my memory. Ulla:)))
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, One of Not So Many, is a great example of this premise. Indeed, you were chosen, and your understanding of the event seems appropriate to what a child would be told. I especially see the importance of a first gift of shoes, and a first cuddly friend.
First sentence in third paragraph: ...of all this, how could I have done?
Thisn sentence has a 'comma splice, which connects two sentences. I would swap out the comma and use a semicolon, since you begin with a statement and end with a question. Also, lose "done" at the end, as it doesn't fit at all.
(...of all this; how could I have?)
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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This story, One of Not So Many, is a great example of this premise. Indeed, you were chosen, and your understanding of the event seems appropriate to what a child would be told. I especially see the importance of a first gift of shoes, and a first cuddly friend.
First sentence in third paragraph: ...of all this, how could I have done?
Thisn sentence has a 'comma splice, which connects two sentences. I would swap out the comma and use a semicolon, since you begin with a statement and end with a question. Also, lose "done" at the end, as it doesn't fit at all.
(...of all this; how could I have?)
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much, Bill. I have taken your advice and edited it. You're right, it reads better that way. I will never forget those boots. It was the first time someone had ever given me a gift. This is not something being told to me. It's something I remember. You better believe it. Ulla:)))
Comment from Brett Matthew West
So, now get to discover a mite about your adoption history. Very interesting what you have detailed here. Glad you found your family members. As I wrote in Unwanted Dog no one has ever come forward to claim kinship with me, and truth be told, do not miss what I never had. Good luck in this contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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So, now get to discover a mite about your adoption history. Very interesting what you have detailed here. Glad you found your family members. As I wrote in Unwanted Dog no one has ever come forward to claim kinship with me, and truth be told, do not miss what I never had. Good luck in this contest.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much, Brett. Truth be told, I only looked up my parents for the fun of it, not realising what a huge impact it would have on me.
Also, by law, your real parents are prevented to look you up, once you're adopted. It's meant to protect you and your adoptive parents. Once your real parents have given you up, that's it.
Thanks so much again. Ulla:)))
