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Mom's Advice

Strong women make others strong.

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Comment from Ric Myworld
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I guess I'm telling my age, but your Bread album brings memories of a song that broke my heart to hear even way back then, but compared to your loss it doesn't seem to monumental anymore. "I found a dairy underneath a tree and started reading about me. The words she'd written took me by surprise. I'd never seen them in her eyes . . . " Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-May-2023


reply by the author on 18-May-2023
    That song makes me so sad for the guy. What a heartbreaking realization. Thank you for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This is a beautiful story about a wise and strong woman. You are who you are today, because of who she was then. You have made a lot of wise decisions in your life because of witnessing the decision making examples of your mother. You have written a sincere, heartfelt tribute to her. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-May-2023


reply by the author on 18-May-2023
    She was that and more. I appreciate your kind review. Gretchen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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I love your story. I assume is about you. You were lucky to have such strong and wise mom. My died when I was 10 years old.

I'm sorry for your loss.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 16-May-2023


reply by the author on 16-May-2023
    I'm sorry you list your mom at such a young age. It's tough. But I don't think I'd be who I am or have my outlook if I had had my dad around. Thank you. Gretchen
Comment from Pantygynt
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This is a stark personal memoir that pulls no punches and tells it like it was mostly the sorrow but the joy of what had been was there too. Well written.

 Comment Written 15-May-2023


reply by the author on 15-May-2023
    Thank you! I appreciate this wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Your Mother was a very wise woman and that was excellent advice she gave you. We should always thank God for the good of every situation and not whine and cry about loss. That is exactly how I feel about my two children dying over the Holidays last year. I thank God for the loan of them. They were wonderful gifts and I will see them again soon. Great story, Dear. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 15-May-2023


reply by the author on 15-May-2023
    Thank you, Nancy. I appreciate this awesome review. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
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She was right, and she was a strong lady. It was tough love. Because she was speaking to herself as well as to you. There is definitely a place for tears, but not for self-pity, and she was pointing out the other side of the coin. Gratitude for a wonderful father, even for a shorter time, is better than living with lesser father-figures who may live longer. Very well written
Wendy

 Comment Written 14-May-2023


reply by the author on 15-May-2023
    Thank you. She was a straight forward woman who said what was on her mind. Whether you were ready or not. Gretchen
Comment from Jay Squires
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Gretchen, what a wise, strong woman your mother was--is? Yours is a beautiful Mother's Day tribute to her. And you delivered it with such style and grace. I even forgive your ... "then went to lay down, instead of "... to lie down." So beautiful. So timely. So you.

Jay

 Comment Written 14-May-2023


reply by the author on 15-May-2023
    Thank you so much, Jay. When she passed away, I had to figure things out on my own. No more sage advice. But she taught me just enough to get by. Thank you for this gracious review and the spectacular rating. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
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Loved this. Glad we do Mother's Day on the same date. I think our Father's days are different. Ours is first Sunday in September. My Dad left us when I was 8. I have written about that elsewhere. No spags!

 Comment Written 14-May-2023


reply by the author on 14-May-2023
    I'm sorry for your loss. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for the awesome rating and personal review. Gretchen
reply by Sankey on 16-May-2023
    Needed to correct a misunderstanding. My father left us not died, when I was 8,
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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You had a very wise mother and one who cared deeply for you. You should have entered this in the Mother's Day contest. It would have been my selection because it doesn't use a lot of lovey words but rather shows a magnificent mother.

 Comment Written 14-May-2023


reply by the author on 14-May-2023
    I didn't even know there was a mother's day contest. But thank you. I appreciate your vote. Lol . Thank you for this awesome review. Gretchen
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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When I was working (I was a fitness trainer), I used to tell my female clients, "Strong women empower other women." Your mom was a strong woman, and she sought to empower you.

I think this is a great tribute to your mom on mother's day. Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest.

Pam

 Comment Written 14-May-2023


reply by the author on 14-May-2023
    Thank you for the kind review and the nice wishes. I didn't enter it. Gretchen