The Sunset of Life
Out for a stroll3 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
As each day arrives and each Sun sets.
We should not have any regrets.
Because life is a precious gift from above.
Well noted and thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
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As each day arrives and each Sun sets.
We should not have any regrets.
Because life is a precious gift from above.
Well noted and thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory"
Comment Written 29-Apr-2023
Comment from RodG
This very short poem conveys a very profound message that each of us can relate to. Who hasn't atone time or another wanted more? I would, however, change the title as our desires are not necessarily secrets we keep from others.
Rod
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This very short poem conveys a very profound message that each of us can relate to. Who hasn't atone time or another wanted more? I would, however, change the title as our desires are not necessarily secrets we keep from others.
Rod
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautiful, one line poem. I enjoyed reading it. As I have lived almost 85 years, I have walked along ministers, and have seen many storms of life, but the Lord has always brought me through, and I always wanted to have just a moment more. Patricia.
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This is a beautiful, one line poem. I enjoyed reading it. As I have lived almost 85 years, I have walked along ministers, and have seen many storms of life, but the Lord has always brought me through, and I always wanted to have just a moment more. Patricia.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2023
