Seasons of Change
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Seasons of Faith - IV"A collection of 30 poems in thirty days
14 total reviews
Comment from karenina
That famous and wise philosopher (Judge Judy) often says God gave us two ears and one mouth for a REASON! (Sorry, I had to include that...)
What I find most profound here is that in all of our quest for knowledge and wisdom, we often feel we have to be so "proactive" --when simply finding a silent space and "hearing" will bring us all that is most treasured to know!
Karenina
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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That famous and wise philosopher (Judge Judy) often says God gave us two ears and one mouth for a REASON! (Sorry, I had to include that...)
What I find most profound here is that in all of our quest for knowledge and wisdom, we often feel we have to be so "proactive" --when simply finding a silent space and "hearing" will bring us all that is most treasured to know!
Karenina
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Karenina, I will share with you that I find, as I am getting older, my silent space is where I prefer to exist most often. Not that I don't like people, I do, but I selfishly try to experience moments of silence, even if it only between words that are spoken.
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Max Ehrmann, wrote "Desiderata"
(Which is Latin for "desired things)
I grew up with that poem hung on the wall in our living room.
My favorite line is now my favortie life philosophy:
"Go placidly amidst the noise and haste, and remember what peace there may be in silence."
I'm with you on this...
Comment from Wendy G
Very thoughtfully written - and very thought-provoking. I think the last stanza is wonderful, but I like it all especially the thought of the necessity of silence while observing and listening, for gaining wisdom. Well done.
Wendy
Typo: "I aught", shought be "ought"
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Very thoughtfully written - and very thought-provoking. I think the last stanza is wonderful, but I like it all especially the thought of the necessity of silence while observing and listening, for gaining wisdom. Well done.
Wendy
Typo: "I aught", shought be "ought"
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Thanks Wendy.
Comment from royowen
An excellent poem, describing the intellect of the wise man that ponders and seeks truth, and all the wonder that, that entails. Wisdom and knowledge are cornucopia of what should be the seeker od truth, not a confirmation of what they think it is, beautifully written Jim. As always a wonderful poem, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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An excellent poem, describing the intellect of the wise man that ponders and seeks truth, and all the wonder that, that entails. Wisdom and knowledge are cornucopia of what should be the seeker od truth, not a confirmation of what they think it is, beautifully written Jim. As always a wonderful poem, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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My sincere thank you, Roy.
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Bless you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Following our heart and not our head can sometimes lead us into trouble but it is something we never regret, I enjoyed your fine sentiments here Jim, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Following our heart and not our head can sometimes lead us into trouble but it is something we never regret, I enjoyed your fine sentiments here Jim, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you Dolly.
Comment from Sugarray77
I really like this verse Jim. The wisdom is pure and easily accepted into our minds as a peaceful balm. We all will learn something from reading this... to still our spirits, quieten our minds, and listen. Very nice.
Melissa
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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I really like this verse Jim. The wisdom is pure and easily accepted into our minds as a peaceful balm. We all will learn something from reading this... to still our spirits, quieten our minds, and listen. Very nice.
Melissa
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Melissa, as always, Imam forever grateful for your wonderful validation. Thank you!
Comment from lyenochka
Perfect final line. We can do much with our minds but it is the soul that has received God's grace and we should use hearts and minds and strength to love Him. Great meditation!
One suggestion to add quotes here:
Deleting the "I would", "they should", "he could", and "I aught",
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Perfect final line. We can do much with our minds but it is the soul that has received God's grace and we should use hearts and minds and strength to love Him. Great meditation!
One suggestion to add quotes here:
Deleting the "I would", "they should", "he could", and "I aught",
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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I appreciate your suggestion, I see the need for this to be grammatically correct. Thank you.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-I like your quote and enjoyed the poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme created
a smooth flow from verse to verse.
-I like the premise in the opening verse.
-I like the message of "follow your heart,"
and how you use that in your conclusion, too.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-I like your quote and enjoyed the poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme created
a smooth flow from verse to verse.
-I like the premise in the opening verse.
-I like the message of "follow your heart,"
and how you use that in your conclusion, too.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you Pam.
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You are welcome, Jim.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I like all of this poem, but I really love the last stanza. You have explained well this Proverb. I have for many years been a member of Faithwriters.com, and I have regularly entered their contests. For this month, our basis for the contests is selected Proverbs. ; )
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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I like all of this poem, but I really love the last stanza. You have explained well this Proverb. I have for many years been a member of Faithwriters.com, and I have regularly entered their contests. For this month, our basis for the contests is selected Proverbs. ; )
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Verna, thank you for sharing information and for your special six star validation. I truly appreciate your reviews.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
This is a very stunning poem! Gorgeous and professional and done by a talented hand.
You have a really good running scheme and an excellent Grasp of the English written language. Your word choices are exactly appropriate and delightful to this lovely poem.
Your word choices are exactly appropriate and delightful to this lovely poem. I find no issues aesthetically speaking nor do I find issues with grammar, punctuation or sentence structure . A fine submission good luck with the contest and wishing you the best of days!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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This is a very stunning poem! Gorgeous and professional and done by a talented hand.
You have a really good running scheme and an excellent Grasp of the English written language. Your word choices are exactly appropriate and delightful to this lovely poem.
Your word choices are exactly appropriate and delightful to this lovely poem. I find no issues aesthetically speaking nor do I find issues with grammar, punctuation or sentence structure . A fine submission good luck with the contest and wishing you the best of days!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This very gentle and reflective verse ponders the value of acquiring knowledge for the sake of it but rather proposes that we clear our minds of "mundane thought" and learn to listen to "the words of old," contained in the Bible and more worthy of being acquired by the heart. It is a very sincere poem in praise of God and God's enduring knowledge and relevance in our world and I think it is, therefore, a very commendable and thought-provoking post. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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This very gentle and reflective verse ponders the value of acquiring knowledge for the sake of it but rather proposes that we clear our minds of "mundane thought" and learn to listen to "the words of old," contained in the Bible and more worthy of being acquired by the heart. It is a very sincere poem in praise of God and God's enduring knowledge and relevance in our world and I think it is, therefore, a very commendable and thought-provoking post. Thanks for sharing, Debbie
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Debbie thank you for your kind words of support
