Those Chocolate Covered Cherries
Let's Write Some Prose contest entry20 total reviews
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is priceless (even for 2member cents!) I had to thank you for giving me a wonderful smile for today. I love your hyperbole and your conversational tone--definitely win-worthy!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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This is priceless (even for 2member cents!) I had to thank you for giving me a wonderful smile for today. I love your hyperbole and your conversational tone--definitely win-worthy!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Verna. Sorry you missed it when I had it promoted. I'm glad this silly piece brightened up your day a little. Have yourself a wonderful day and thank you again.
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Ron
Comment from Teri7
This is some really good action packed prose you have penned for the contest. I love Chocolate Covered Cherries too! That was really fun to read and review. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, teri
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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This is some really good action packed prose you have penned for the contest. I love Chocolate Covered Cherries too! That was really fun to read and review. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, teri
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the great review and big sixer, Teri. Yeah, I always like to add over the top action in my stories. Lol. I really appreciate the generous rating. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great day and thank you again.
Ron
Comment from pome lover
I LOVE Queen Anne chocolate covered cherries. My daughter usually gives me a box for Christmas in my stocking.
That story is hysterical! Some things are worth getting hurt - at least, um other people. :)
What fun to write. And read. Imagination gone wild, and the perfect ending. great!
Katharine
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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I LOVE Queen Anne chocolate covered cherries. My daughter usually gives me a box for Christmas in my stocking.
That story is hysterical! Some things are worth getting hurt - at least, um other people. :)
What fun to write. And read. Imagination gone wild, and the perfect ending. great!
Katharine
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Katharine. Yeah, my mom always does the same thing for me. lol Sorry about the delayed reply. I have had family in town and have been busy the last few days. I really appreciate the generous stars. Have yourself a great day and thank you again.
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Ron
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good for your mom :)
Comment from Annmuma
So creative and such fun to read!!!! It certainly reads like a contest winner, but it is my first one of the entries I've read so far. Good luck. By the way, I love those chocolate covered cherries as well and have not seen them in years. They were always a staple of 'growing-up Christmases'. Thanks for the reminder. ann
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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So creative and such fun to read!!!! It certainly reads like a contest winner, but it is my first one of the entries I've read so far. Good luck. By the way, I love those chocolate covered cherries as well and have not seen them in years. They were always a staple of 'growing-up Christmases'. Thanks for the reminder. ann
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Ann. Sorry about the delayed reply. I have had family in town and have been busy the last few days. Yeah, I grew up with those treats myself. Every Christmas season I stock up on them. lol I dearly appreciate the gracious rating. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a wonderful day and thank you again.
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Ron
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, very well done. This is funny, and I am so glad that I don't like chocolate-covered cherries. I do remember them from my childhood, but my mother preferred Millionaires. Great humor, and excellent writing.Good luck in the contest. Terry.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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LOL, very well done. This is funny, and I am so glad that I don't like chocolate-covered cherries. I do remember them from my childhood, but my mother preferred Millionaires. Great humor, and excellent writing.Good luck in the contest. Terry.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2023
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Hey, Terry, hi. Thank you for the fantastic review and fat sixer, friend. Yeah, every Christmas I stock up on those things because I love them so much. Lol. I really appreciate the awesome rating and the good luck wishes, T. I'm glad you liked my silly story. Thank you again. Have yourself a great day.
Ron
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Maybe next year.
Well written. Good work.
Who wouldn't go to fist city for a whole box of Queen Anne's? They are cordial, after all.
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Maybe next year.
Well written. Good work.
Who wouldn't go to fist city for a whole box of Queen Anne's? They are cordial, after all.
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Lol. Thank you for the hilarious review and generous stars, Wayne. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great day, friend.
Ron
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Thanks for ending my night of reading on a giggle. This is totally amusing and I didn't believe it for a minute. Once I'd have fought you for those chocolate covered cherries until I ate the full box one Christmas day. Our family has the policy you clean up after yourself; no fun at all when it is Christmas dinner laced with chocolate covered cherries.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Thanks for ending my night of reading on a giggle. This is totally amusing and I didn't believe it for a minute. Once I'd have fought you for those chocolate covered cherries until I ate the full box one Christmas day. Our family has the policy you clean up after yourself; no fun at all when it is Christmas dinner laced with chocolate covered cherries.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Lol. Yeah, that might make me want to stay away from them for a while too. Lol. Thank you for the fantastic review, Carol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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Ron
Comment from Ulla
Hehehe, this is just too funn I loved it. I can just imagine.it all and then in the end neither of them win. It's so typical, isn't it? I wish you the best of luck with this great story. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Hehehe, this is just too funn I loved it. I can just imagine.it all and then in the end neither of them win. It's so typical, isn't it? I wish you the best of luck with this great story. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 04-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
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Thank you for the fantastic review and stars, Ulla. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Have yourself a wonderful rest of your weekend.
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Ron
Comment from Mary Shifman
I love chocolate covered cherries: especially Queen Anne. They always make me think of Christmas and my mother. Mom always made sure that each of us got out own box every year. Back then they seemed to hold a lot more and they were still only a $1.00 if my memory is correct. I never had to wrestle anyone for my box of sweets, though. This is a hilarious story with a fitting end.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
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I love chocolate covered cherries: especially Queen Anne. They always make me think of Christmas and my mother. Mom always made sure that each of us got out own box every year. Back then they seemed to hold a lot more and they were still only a $1.00 if my memory is correct. I never had to wrestle anyone for my box of sweets, though. This is a hilarious story with a fitting end.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2023
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Lol. My mom still gives me a box for Christmas. Yes, just like everything, they've went up in price too. At the Dollar store you're only getting half a box worth for your buck. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and stars, Mary. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
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Ron
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, no chocolate covered cherry rewards for either of you, but maybe enough satisfaction between the both of you that the other didn't get to enjoy them either. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Well, no chocolate covered cherry rewards for either of you, but maybe enough satisfaction between the both of you that the other didn't get to enjoy them either. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Haha. Thank you for the great review, Ric. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece. Have a great weekend.
Ron
