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Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Pizza and Fairy Tales"I dare you....
17 total reviews
Comment from wintersknights
okay dear
I liked it simply because we both have slipped into that black spot and well frankly I find that happy is not just what I want to write. happy aint the cup of tea right now. your depth of emotions just pull at me and I do mean pull until I am on an emotional jog with you. we poets just have the soul of pain and memories deep in us and we have to let it free. we also have that side that just is plain silly. I like your style and when you go dark I feel the dark.
wk
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okay dear
I liked it simply because we both have slipped into that black spot and well frankly I find that happy is not just what I want to write. happy aint the cup of tea right now. your depth of emotions just pull at me and I do mean pull until I am on an emotional jog with you. we poets just have the soul of pain and memories deep in us and we have to let it free. we also have that side that just is plain silly. I like your style and when you go dark I feel the dark.
wk
Comment Written 03-Jul-2006
Comment from Lisloh
'Pizza & Fairtales'---who'da thunk...? Why you of course...:)
Your talent shines in this one Shelley as does your heart, soul, and all you've beared. Successfully I might add---accept it! You're awesome!
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
Excellent presentation!
'yet never learning how not to feel
all her emotions are too very real
they run so deep
sometimes she can't even sleep'
This speaks volumes my Friend---excellent!
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'Pizza & Fairtales'---who'da thunk...? Why you of course...:)
Your talent shines in this one Shelley as does your heart, soul, and all you've beared. Successfully I might add---accept it! You're awesome!
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
Excellent presentation!
'yet never learning how not to feel
all her emotions are too very real
they run so deep
sometimes she can't even sleep'
This speaks volumes my Friend---excellent!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2006
Comment from MikeSamford
Pizza and Fairy Tales by shelley kaye
Yes do we not all want to be young again?
When life was sweet, and before we found out about life,
and how sad it can be.
Good poem.
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Pizza and Fairy Tales by shelley kaye
Yes do we not all want to be young again?
When life was sweet, and before we found out about life,
and how sad it can be.
Good poem.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2006
Comment from mamaboots
Hey Shelley,
This is very interesting :) I think you met the challenge and in such a creative way!
I liked how it went from happy and light to dark and back to light again. Very well-written and an excellent display of your talent. Loved the title!!
Have a good day,
mamaboots
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Hey Shelley,
This is very interesting :) I think you met the challenge and in such a creative way!
I liked how it went from happy and light to dark and back to light again. Very well-written and an excellent display of your talent. Loved the title!!
Have a good day,
mamaboots
Comment Written 01-Jul-2006
Comment from greeneyes
How wonderful! You successfully managed to do this great challenge! I definitely have to think of a challenge for you now!!!!!
This flowed well and had great imagery
Job well done!
:)
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How wonderful! You successfully managed to do this great challenge! I definitely have to think of a challenge for you now!!!!!
This flowed well and had great imagery
Job well done!
:)
Comment Written 01-Jul-2006
Comment from KING SLATON
BRAT.....LOL...LOL....I am at a loss for words, a difficult accomplishment I assure you!!! The phrase pizza and fairy tales actually comes from a comment made to Paul McCartney by John Lennon (are you listening Beatlegirl61) You have made my day. Thank you for posting this fine piece of work.
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BRAT.....LOL...LOL....I am at a loss for words, a difficult accomplishment I assure you!!! The phrase pizza and fairy tales actually comes from a comment made to Paul McCartney by John Lennon (are you listening Beatlegirl61) You have made my day. Thank you for posting this fine piece of work.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2006
Comment from rl dubour
Pizza and Fairy Tales----now this is what I enjoy reading from your pen, and I would say you met the challenge head on and did an excellent job of it--keep it up and keep smiling--YOU BETTER! :)
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Pizza and Fairy Tales----now this is what I enjoy reading from your pen, and I would say you met the challenge head on and did an excellent job of it--keep it up and keep smiling--YOU BETTER! :)
Comment Written 01-Jul-2006
Comment from Wendyanne
"Pizza and Fairytales." How can anyone not read and review a poem with such a fantastic title? This is a truly excellent poetic piece of writing Shelley. Superb.
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"Pizza and Fairytales." How can anyone not read and review a poem with such a fantastic title? This is a truly excellent poetic piece of writing Shelley. Superb.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2006
Comment from luna
You did great. The writing was outstanding and the picture was exceptional. I think you met your self-imposed challenge very well! Keep on going! Pizza and fairy tales...lol what a maroon... with the lives we have lived.
Your friend,
J
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You did great. The writing was outstanding and the picture was exceptional. I think you met your self-imposed challenge very well! Keep on going! Pizza and fairy tales...lol what a maroon... with the lives we have lived.
Your friend,
J
Comment Written 01-Jul-2006
Comment from Norbanus
With scars upon her little heart
is no way for this girl to start
her day in frozen artic land.
But, here she is with trembling hand
We see she's shy and wonder why;
she holds the answer to our eye.
With trust and rust and little curls
the choice is narrowed 'mongst the girls.
Order pizza and fairy tales;
stay clear of those puppy dog tails.
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With scars upon her little heart
is no way for this girl to start
her day in frozen artic land.
But, here she is with trembling hand
We see she's shy and wonder why;
she holds the answer to our eye.
With trust and rust and little curls
the choice is narrowed 'mongst the girls.
Order pizza and fairy tales;
stay clear of those puppy dog tails.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2006
