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Not Me Says My She.

Who's Afraid Of The Big Bad Wolf?!

3 total reviews 
Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Ciao Rhonnie , this is an interesting read.

First off I never liked the fairytale of Red Riding Hood because it depicts the wolf as the villian.

Wolves are instead noble creatures and very important for the ecosystem .. they keep in check the elk and deer population eliminating the sick and old too.

Men instead are not so noble ..

That said, there are exceptions and I have had the luck to met one .

He is sweet, he sends me virtual flowers and writes poetry.

He doesn't think showing his feelings is a sign of weakness.

I too cherish our friendship.



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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023

Comment from patcelaw
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This poem is very well done and I enjoyed it very much. You're writing flowed smooth as I was listening to it and your punctuation was superb. Thank you for making sure the punctuation is in you writing. God bless and have a good day. Patricia

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023

Comment from Janilou
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LOL I enjoyed this, and laughed at the closing lines. I'm sure she would agree with you. Women and men can both be that way. Guess it just depends.
Loved the Little Red Riding Hood analogy.
All the best,
Jan

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2023