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Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Decorating the Heart"I dare you....
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Comment from angel of the quill
Each poem is contained the writers very soul
it is a part of heart and should be shared and whole
there is the reviewers job to listen and be shared
at the authors intent if it can be found to care
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2006
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Each poem is contained the writers very soul
it is a part of heart and should be shared and whole
there is the reviewers job to listen and be shared
at the authors intent if it can be found to care
Comment Written 08-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2006
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cool poem
thank you so much :-)
Comment from WomanBehindThePen
A Rainbow of stars, for this excellent cleverly colorful concoction of free verse, the author takes us on a journey " over the rainbow" the colors of love all represented in her beautiful verse. Colorfully done, wonderfully written, a rainbow of literary delight; from a poet worth more than her weight in gold.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2006
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A Rainbow of stars, for this excellent cleverly colorful concoction of free verse, the author takes us on a journey " over the rainbow" the colors of love all represented in her beautiful verse. Colorfully done, wonderfully written, a rainbow of literary delight; from a poet worth more than her weight in gold.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2006
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thank you lots :-)
Comment from wintersknights
my dear this is a very light and joyful poem that echoes in the soul and heart.
I enjoyed this light ride in reality and a smile. Yes you made me smile as I read the words. thanks
wk
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my dear this is a very light and joyful poem that echoes in the soul and heart.
I enjoyed this light ride in reality and a smile. Yes you made me smile as I read the words. thanks
wk
Comment Written 02-Jul-2006
Comment from Deesire
Delightful, creative and refreshing! Loved the picture and the use of coloured words as you wrote your poem. Unique layout! Surrounds one with thoughts of love and happiness when reading your poem. Only one word I wonder about, aggressive? Would assertive be more in keeping with the peace in the heart? Deesire
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Delightful, creative and refreshing! Loved the picture and the use of coloured words as you wrote your poem. Unique layout! Surrounds one with thoughts of love and happiness when reading your poem. Only one word I wonder about, aggressive? Would assertive be more in keeping with the peace in the heart? Deesire
Comment Written 29-Jun-2006
Comment from Angelica104
Decorating the heart a great piece and a great idea and makes a person wanna have their heart painted with such colorfulness, very creative.
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Decorating the heart a great piece and a great idea and makes a person wanna have their heart painted with such colorfulness, very creative.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2006
Comment from CaseyMezera
Sorry shelley,
I really didn't feel like this was a testament to your talent. There is too much window dressing and not enough content. It's almost like you are trying to distract the reader with the font color, and you are not putting the "writing" in the writing.
I realize that this was probably a labor of love and I also know about the artistic part of poetry. However, my personal preference is to have that expression in the words written, and not in the format.
On a related note, you would find it difficult getting this published as it is. Most publishers consider it sophmoric to present a poem in any such format.
Ax
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Sorry shelley,
I really didn't feel like this was a testament to your talent. There is too much window dressing and not enough content. It's almost like you are trying to distract the reader with the font color, and you are not putting the "writing" in the writing.
I realize that this was probably a labor of love and I also know about the artistic part of poetry. However, my personal preference is to have that expression in the words written, and not in the format.
On a related note, you would find it difficult getting this published as it is. Most publishers consider it sophmoric to present a poem in any such format.
Ax
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2006
Comment from greeneyes
Wonderful poem! You certainly met the challenge very well, I will have to try to think of a challenge for you too! :)
This poem flowed well and was a joy to read & review
:)
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Wonderful poem! You certainly met the challenge very well, I will have to try to think of a challenge for you too! :)
This poem flowed well and was a joy to read & review
:)
Comment Written 28-Jun-2006
Comment from clhutchinson
And the challenge/request was met in stunning fashion. Well chosen wording for the colors in a format that's vibrant and moving. A delightful piece.
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And the challenge/request was met in stunning fashion. Well chosen wording for the colors in a format that's vibrant and moving. A delightful piece.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2006
Comment from Dklrdmcches
The five stars is for the outstanding poem. The way you unified the colors to paint a heart was great. I would have never thought about doing something like that, but I really did not enjoy the lay out of your piece. I think it knocked down the quality of your hard work. I guess I just like my poetry in a standard form. Great job on this though. Thank you for sharing...dklrd
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The five stars is for the outstanding poem. The way you unified the colors to paint a heart was great. I would have never thought about doing something like that, but I really did not enjoy the lay out of your piece. I think it knocked down the quality of your hard work. I guess I just like my poetry in a standard form. Great job on this though. Thank you for sharing...dklrd
Comment Written 28-Jun-2006
Comment from damevictoria
I liked this extremely well written poem..........I liked the form and the imagery; I didn't find any obvious errors...thanks for sharing
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I liked this extremely well written poem..........I liked the form and the imagery; I didn't find any obvious errors...thanks for sharing
Comment Written 28-Jun-2006
