I Choose Rainbows
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Comment from prettybluebirds
Age catches up with us all in the end. What amazes me is how short a time it is from youth to old age. I'm seventy-six and still haven't quite figured out how that happened. Nice writing. It was a delight to read.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Age catches up with us all in the end. What amazes me is how short a time it is from youth to old age. I'm seventy-six and still haven't quite figured out how that happened. Nice writing. It was a delight to read.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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I appreciate
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Sholessjo,
you touched on some great emotions painted with a sound of knowledge.
Before I go further I'll suggest one add-on and the fixing of spelling... or should that be what I call fat-finger syndrome? :) Thr= the bodies of life... and I love that line!
The suggestion is We live with... We live within?
I enjoyed reading this thought provoking poem... even after reading a few times I kept getting to the end... that didn't have an end, just a lingering thought... and then I'd laugh to myself thinking ' the body beckons, it calls... me, it beckons and falls apart.
As I said, I enjoyed this poem and the reading and thought attached within the subject. Well done!
With our thoughts we create...
the age of reason.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Hi Sholessjo,
you touched on some great emotions painted with a sound of knowledge.
Before I go further I'll suggest one add-on and the fixing of spelling... or should that be what I call fat-finger syndrome? :) Thr= the bodies of life... and I love that line!
The suggestion is We live with... We live within?
I enjoyed reading this thought provoking poem... even after reading a few times I kept getting to the end... that didn't have an end, just a lingering thought... and then I'd laugh to myself thinking ' the body beckons, it calls... me, it beckons and falls apart.
As I said, I enjoyed this poem and the reading and thought attached within the subject. Well done!
With our thoughts we create...
the age of reason.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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You are a wonderful James. I appreciate the comments about with or within. I thought about it. With refers to an internal body and external perception. Within deals with internal body aging only. I am working with the concept of logic and emotion being two separate body functions. I looked for the typing error but couldn?t find anything. I?m going to spell check it
Thanks
