I Choose Rainbows
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Comment from Mariana Convery
This poem has many layers of meaning from a reader-response perspective. Why, how, what's the reason for it all? In the end nothing but molecules. To me this is how poetry should be written, to make one think. Really enjoyed this one.
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This poem has many layers of meaning from a reader-response perspective. Why, how, what's the reason for it all? In the end nothing but molecules. To me this is how poetry should be written, to make one think. Really enjoyed this one.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a lovely poem, but I don't understand why it ends with the word, with. It is skillfully written and has a lovely flow of words. The ending just seems odd to me. Good work.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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This is a lovely poem, but I don't understand why it ends with the word, with. It is skillfully written and has a lovely flow of words. The ending just seems odd to me. Good work.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Hi, it is a work in progress. I didn?t expect anyone to see. I almost never get views. Thanks I appreciate your opinion.
Norm
