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People Take A Stand

This is a plea to those who don't VOTE

14 total reviews 
Comment from Boogienights
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I agree one hundred and twenty percent! You have this all correct, we are losing our country and we must put a stop to it now! Its up to us to vote out all who try to tear our country down and take away our freedoms. Thanks for sharing this. :)

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much for the Exceptional review! I am honored! I'm glad I wrote this and so many have agreed with me, which I hoped they would! Good to see many fellow Americans believe in the United States and Freedom and want to keep it this way. Thank you again!
Comment from royowen
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I wonder in the days of waning empires did the common Romans, think these things, or the Mongols when their leaders weakened how they thought. People are just people whatever or wherever they are. I know when many different groups think that their ideals are compromised and important, they come into opposition. If one belief reigns then unity will be in evidence, but if a number of different perceptions all clash, that is where democracies break down, if the head can't agree, "freedom" doesn't exist anymore. True freedom is a fallacy. Bless you, Roy

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
    You are totally right, but if our freedom is only a fallacy, so be it because having none is what I worry about. The people have the final say, can anyone say Revolution? It's not over until its over! Thank you for the excellent review and I respect your views on freedom.
reply by royowen on 23-Oct-2022
    Welcome
Comment from jacquelyn popp
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This poem was a powerful poem for me to read. It was very enjoyable. The words used really drive the point home, and it is true, only we the people can help to make a difference. The rhyming was perfect, and the poem flowed together easily for me. Thank you very much for sharing. More people need to read your poem, and take a stand.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
    Thank you for the Exceptional review and your spot on comments! I am pleased to see so many agree and have the American spirit! It makes me feel good. Thank you again!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, People Take a Stand, gives a holler out for taking charge of the government and not allowing one super leaning political party or the other take us too far either direction until we don't feel like America anymore.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
    Thank you for your review! And you know, our system was set up for check and balance, not one political party to rule without regard to the other. That was the whole idea. And really, they are both supposed to be for America, but I'm not sure that is the true agenda anymore. That's why the people with our numbers should be able to determine what the people want, not the government.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is true for all countries. I have totally lost patience with people who don't vote and then complain about governmental failings. With age, my intolerance level has risen greatly. In the face of incompetence from our 'leaders', I beg people not only to vote, but to vote more responsibly. This is our only hope for the future. Well-said. Kate xx

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much for your review! I too, feel voting is important. Not just to vote but to understand what you are voting for. I can't believe how many people I know don't want to get involved with politics. And at my age 62, a young 62 I might add, I am just blown away by the people who think it doesn't matter. That's part of the problem as far as I'm concerned. I hope for the best outcome at the polls, and no tampering! Thanks again, Moonbaby
Comment from Aiona
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I like poems that rhyme, and this one fits the bill. I admire the skill it takes to create a poem with a theme, and this one has a theme, with words that fit within certain parameters -- usually meter and rhyme. Well done!

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much for the review! I speak from my heart, I do with all of my writing. It's the only way I know how to. I'm not very good at voicing my thoughts to a group out loud, but give me a piece of paper and a pen and the words flow faster than I can keep up! Thank you again!
Comment from Richard Montfort Cary
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Moon,
Right on! Sadly on target! The WEF should be continuously exposed for its evil ways, its evil plans. We have to wake up, or we will find ourselves, some day, unable to wake at all. Keep writing while you can and while we are able to read the words....
Richard

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
    Thank you Richard for your comments and understanding of what has been taking place right before our eyes! Some still have no clue and refuse to believe it. This isn't what I want for future generations to come.
reply by Richard Montfort Cary on 18-Oct-2022
    Right....
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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nice political rant from a right-wing perspective. As a progressive if I were writing this I would be writing about the nefarious neo-fascist theocrats trying to take over the world. But hey it is your poem and you can rant about whatever you want. it is well done in any event.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
    Well thank you for the review! What's wrong with keeping America free? How would we look like if we were Progressive? Sadly, Progressive is a cake walk compared to communism, and that is where we are headed. And all the people who are on top think they will be spared, Ha! They will be in no better position then the people they deem below them. The jokes on them, the devil never plays fair.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a warning to all to use their vote wisely as Governments can steer us into paths we don't want to walk down. Democracy is meant to be about freedom, but some parties try to control the population, especially the socialists, beware when choosing your leader, find our what he stands for, a poignant write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
    Thank you for the review and your comments! You are wise and make very good points about voting. I only wish those who don't want to involve themselves with politics would understand how important their vote is!
Comment from Jane Jane King
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This is a very heartfelt poem and your love for our country comes through loud and clear. I think the most precious of our rights is the right to vote...in a fairly and honestly run election. That is the key to everything

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
    Yes, I couldn't agree more! Fair voting should be first priority in any election.
    Thank you so much for your review and comments!