Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and well written Septolet poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 25-May-2022

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reply by the author on 25-May-2022

Thanks!

reply by Teri7 on 25-May-2022

you are so welcome!!!

reply by the author on 25-May-2022

I appreciate your reviews on my poems. I enter a lot of contests.

reply by Teri7 on 25-May-2022

That is good. This one got my vote!

reply by the author on 25-May-2022

Thanks! Have you read my others?

reply by Teri7 on 25-May-2022

I am not sure. What is the name of another one?

reply by the author on 25-May-2022

Be Strong is one poem and Mrs. Bates, an essay about my third grade teacher.

reply by Teri7 on 26-May-2022

you are so welcome. I will try to look at them too, We are taking care of our 8 year old grandson today. love and blessings, Teri

reply by the author on 26-May-2022

reply by Teri7 on 26-May-2022

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a great Septolet poem. I agree with what you say, though God knows our hearts and sometimes our words are not what matters. Thank you for sharing this, and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-May-2022

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reply by the author on 22-May-2022

Thanks!

reply by the author on 22-May-2022

I appreciate all your reviews on my poems you see.

Comment from Sarah Tummey

Excellent

A good message, and you did well to fit it into so few words. I wondered why the second verse wasn't the same as the first, but had an extra word; then I read that it was a Septolet and it made sense.

 Comment Written 22-May-2022

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reply by the author on 22-May-2022

Each verse has the same amount of words in it.

reply by Sarah Tummey on 22-May-2022

Sorry. I meant extra syllable. I expected "Each time You pray" to match with "The words You say", but of course you needed "That" to craft the poem.