Here's The Scoop
one line poem11 total reviews
Comment from Beri Bee
Ah, the illusive bluebird of happiness! Few can say these words and have them be true, I think, but oh the feelings to those who can! It gives the reader a lot to think about. Is it an ideal, a fantasy, or reality? Love wins? Yet, the words in this poem retain beauty and innocence. Thanks!
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Ah, the illusive bluebird of happiness! Few can say these words and have them be true, I think, but oh the feelings to those who can! It gives the reader a lot to think about. Is it an ideal, a fantasy, or reality? Love wins? Yet, the words in this poem retain beauty and innocence. Thanks!
Comment Written 04-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When there is love in the air we can share a momentous experience that we don't ever forget and you brought the moment to life here Alicia, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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When there is love in the air we can share a momentous experience that we don't ever forget and you brought the moment to life here Alicia, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you :)
Comment from Irish Rain
Ha ha...I love this.
This is just delightful.
And of course, that's exactly what a
successful relationship takes...
mutual love.
Wonderful!
Blessings...
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Ha ha...I love this.
This is just delightful.
And of course, that's exactly what a
successful relationship takes...
mutual love.
Wonderful!
Blessings...
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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You're nice. Thank you :)
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Have a nice weekend!!
Comment from royowen
This is a great one line poem, and after all if one is going to write a more fulfilling one liner then love is alway the go to subject to write about, so well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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This is a great one line poem, and after all if one is going to write a more fulfilling one liner then love is alway the go to subject to write about, so well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you. God bless :)
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You too
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-line poem, Here's the Scoop, uses twelve words and makes the statement that love is here and that is all we know and all we need to know.
Note: I feel that if "one line" means one sentence, you have three. At a minimum you might want to replace both commas with semicolons, as you actually have three clauses.
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reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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This one-line poem, Here's the Scoop, uses twelve words and makes the statement that love is here and that is all we know and all we need to know.
Note: I feel that if "one line" means one sentence, you have three. At a minimum you might want to replace both commas with semicolons, as you actually have three clauses.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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It's written poetically as one sentence. I like it as is... Thank you :)
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Thank you for using my artwork!
Great job on your one liner poem.
Now how would you say that in a completely different manner without using these words? I challenge you. :)
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you for using my artwork!
Great job on your one liner poem.
Now how would you say that in a completely different manner without using these words? I challenge you. :)
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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I like good art. You're masterpiece was appealling. I appreciate you. Thank you :)
Comment from jessizero
This one line poem spoke volumes. I hope things stay happy for the people in your poem. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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This one line poem spoke volumes. I hope things stay happy for the people in your poem. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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I met somebody last month. I wish we could have a normal love relationship. And he's in the military like less than 2 hours away. So, I dunno what would happen. Love should be simple. It's a basic in life. You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
That's so true! When there is mutual love and each one learns the other's love language and keep showing and telling each other about their love, they can live happily after. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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That's so true! When there is mutual love and each one learns the other's love language and keep showing and telling each other about their love, they can live happily after. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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Thank you :)
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Sunni,
It sounds like you've started a new relationship. I hope that if that's the case that you'll be able to maintain the feeling of happiness. In time, the surface feelings may fade, but they might be replaced with a more lasting kind of love that survives struggles.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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Hello Sunni,
It sounds like you've started a new relationship. I hope that if that's the case that you'll be able to maintain the feeling of happiness. In time, the surface feelings may fade, but they might be replaced with a more lasting kind of love that survives struggles.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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Hiyah Tom. Trying to start up a love relationship. You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is well presented, Sunni.
I enjoyed reading it. The art, the words,
and the message all pair perfectly to create
a great little entry.
Best wishes in the contest,
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Your contest entry is well presented, Sunni.
I enjoyed reading it. The art, the words,
and the message all pair perfectly to create
a great little entry.
Best wishes in the contest,
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you :)
