Where does faith start?
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Comment from Darkhorse555
from the title it was like asking the question, we all get the answer to in the end, time certainly heals all wounds, your pen paints this beautifully in prayer, i pray you have a blessed week
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from the title it was like asking the question, we all get the answer to in the end, time certainly heals all wounds, your pen paints this beautifully in prayer, i pray you have a blessed week
Comment Written 20-Apr-2022
Comment from LisaMay
"Just have faith" is a simple statement but a huge unknown. To some it comes easily, to others it is a mystery. Your deeply personal poem shows how others can meddle in someone's life when they are judgmental, but good lives following 'christian' values are lived nevertheless.
I hope you are reunited with your mother and you both will know the Big Secret.
I found the mid-blue background didn't quite contrast enough for easy reading with the grey font colour. A paler blue would be better for older eyes.
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"Just have faith" is a simple statement but a huge unknown. To some it comes easily, to others it is a mystery. Your deeply personal poem shows how others can meddle in someone's life when they are judgmental, but good lives following 'christian' values are lived nevertheless.
I hope you are reunited with your mother and you both will know the Big Secret.
I found the mid-blue background didn't quite contrast enough for easy reading with the grey font colour. A paler blue would be better for older eyes.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
Comment from Ulla
You are back? So good to see you. I can understand your doubts, but I hope you don't lose your beliefs.
I've never had any religious beliefs, so I can't lose that, but I could lose all my precious family which would be the end of my world. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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You are back? So good to see you. I can understand your doubts, but I hope you don't lose your beliefs.
I've never had any religious beliefs, so I can't lose that, but I could lose all my precious family which would be the end of my world. Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Hi Ulla, if you have time go back. I completely changed this poem before I entered it. I need to write again. Life has been challenging.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Jusylee72 a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one. Hopefully so will others, good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello Jusylee72 a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take is definitely a good one. Hopefully so will others, good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a beautifully written piece, Judy. We are lucky people not to have suffered the torment of dictatorships. Although, we came dangerously close. The people of Ukraine are strong people culturally and otherwise. I believe this is a beautiful tribute to their unity and will to regroup after all is said and done. Thank you for sharing this. Much success.
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This is a beautifully written piece, Judy. We are lucky people not to have suffered the torment of dictatorships. Although, we came dangerously close. The people of Ukraine are strong people culturally and otherwise. I believe this is a beautiful tribute to their unity and will to regroup after all is said and done. Thank you for sharing this. Much success.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
