Ripping through Time
A dribble flash fiction with 50 words5 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed you flash dribble fiction. Jack the Ripper managed to escape but finding a way to time travel to the future. I wonder if that is why we are still having so many murders. Who would suspect someone dressed in Steampunk.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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I enjoyed you flash dribble fiction. Jack the Ripper managed to escape but finding a way to time travel to the future. I wonder if that is why we are still having so many murders. Who would suspect someone dressed in Steampunk.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2022
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Lol I'm glad you enjoyed this fun piece. I saw the picture of the steampunk group and the idea just popped into my head. There actually was a movie years ago called Time after Time that was based on the premise that Jack escaped in a time machine - built by H G Wells. That's what I had in mind...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An odd bunch of guys dressed up as odd balls here and you are right, time travel was very much on their minds in Victorian times, they wanted to escape the rats in the streets and in the houses! Much enjoyed June, love Dolly x
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An odd bunch of guys dressed up as odd balls here and you are right, time travel was very much on their minds in Victorian times, they wanted to escape the rats in the streets and in the houses! Much enjoyed June, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
Comment from Malcolm Rothery
A difficult job getting a story or ideas over with just 50 words, but you did it well. And thank you for explaining what steampunk is, I have been wondering! Now, should we send the police around, Jack, seeing as how you have owned up?!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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A difficult job getting a story or ideas over with just 50 words, but you did it well. And thank you for explaining what steampunk is, I have been wondering! Now, should we send the police around, Jack, seeing as how you have owned up?!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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This was a fun challenge. I'm glad you enjoyed the reference to the Ripper. Thanks for taking the time to read and share your thoughts.
Comment from jessizero
Dribble flash fiction can be tricky, but I found yours to be delightful. I like that you wrote Jack the Ripper into the story. Thanks for sharing this story here.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Dribble flash fiction can be tricky, but I found yours to be delightful. I like that you wrote Jack the Ripper into the story. Thanks for sharing this story here.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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This was a fun challenge. I'm glad you enjoyed the reference to the Ripper. Thanks for taking the time to read and share your thoughts.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello June a marvelous Monday to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed reading your Dribble flash fiction, it's hard to try and tell a story in so few words but you executed well. Good job and good luck!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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Hello June a marvelous Monday to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed reading your Dribble flash fiction, it's hard to try and tell a story in so few words but you executed well. Good job and good luck!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2022
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This was a fun challenge. I'm glad you enjoyed the reference to the Ripper. Thanks for taking the time to read and share your thoughts.
