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Just Because

I write just because it's fun

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Comment from Malcolm Rothery
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This holds a mirror up to why I started writing. In fact, I had to check that I had not written this! So good to meet a kindred spirit.
I needed something to do, a hobby, after retiring, and Covid lockdowns gave me the space in which to write as did an illness when blood clots invaded my lungs.
My initial efforts were not good and like you, the grammar was awful!
But then I started writing about incidents from my life, and I started to love it. Now I have had some 6-star reviews and won a competition this week. So keep going. Maybe one of us will win a Booker Prize. As for rules, I have started ignoring Grammarly and writing what feels right. Have a lovely day.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
    Thank you. I ignore Grammarly at times too. Sometimes Grammarly thinks I should rephrase a paragrah and I like it just the way it is I win the contests quite often so I can't be all wrong. I'm glad to hear you are winning too. It sounds like you are doing quite well. Hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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You told us a very good reason why you like to write. The part where you mention about the s------ word, brings to fact the many reasons why people write, it is to release the stress and burdens they carry.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2022
    Thank you. Still, the main reason I write is just because. Hugs to you.
Comment from Shirley McLain
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What a wonderful story you tell of your writing career. I enjoyed reading it, and if the grammar was bad, I didn't see it either. I can see why you got 1st place in the contest. Congrats and have a great evening. Shirley

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thank you. I just wrote what I honestly felt about writing. It was fun. Hugs.
Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
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Thank you for you essay about why you write. I found it interesting and easy to read (no grammar errors this time that I found). Your paragraph about your son's death and your own thoughts of suicide was extremely touching. I think if you look at it again you will understand one of the important reasons you write; writing helps you sort out your own issues and feelings through the process of putting the words down. Keep it up!
I did note that the following sentence is a bit awkward: "I must go back and edit them someday, is what I have been telling myself for the last two or three years." You might try rewriting this sentence.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thank you. Yeah I thought that sentence was a bit off too. I didn't have time to change it before the contest but I got lucky and it won anyway. Hugs to you.
Comment from RGstar
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What a beautiful soul. So sorry abut your son, and as you might have heard, I lost mine a couple of weeks ago. I am so happy positive thoughts became you, even if divine help.
Good you are here.
Have a wonderful day.
My best wishes.
RGstar

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thank you. No, I didn't hear about your son. I am so very sorry and I understand your pain. Bless you.
Comment from pa Banardi
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I thought that a very touching story. I feel bad for you so much pain you must have gone through. I am glad you got the help you needed and here you are a writer good job God Bless you

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2022
    Thank you for reading and your kind comments. It was a long time ago and, while one never forgets, it does get easier over the years. The writing helped a lot too.
Comment from Jane Jane King
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This is a well written, moving piece. And I agree with you...writing is therapeutic, I think because it puts feelings into words. I am so sorry about your loss, but I am glad that writing has helped to relieve some of the pain. God bless.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thank you. It was all a very long time ago but writing helped me get passed it. Hugs to you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the Why I Write writing prompt contest. Good form. You followed the rules of the contest well.

Writing is a good way to get your feelings on paper and out of your mind. I can imagine how painful must be to lose a son, I'm very sorry for your loss.

I'm bipolar with deep episodes of depression. I tried to kill myself more than once. Thank you for sharing. I know there other like us and it's good for them to see we made it through. Perfect write, you got my vote. The only suggestion is to add a suicide prevention number...

National Suicide Prevention Lifeline
24 hours.
800-273-8255

Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thank you for your interesting comments. I am long past any chance of suicide now. I have a friend who is bipolar like you and I know she has had some rough times. Thanks again for sharing your thoughts and the six stars. Hugs to you and stay safe.
Comment from Aubree Lorraine
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Simply wanting to really is the best reason of all, isn't it? What better than to spend your time doing what you enjoy! I'm glad you found a healthy outlet for your pain and grieving.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thank you. Yep, just because is a good reason to write. One doesn't feel pressured when it is just because. Hugs to you.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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It's always interesting to find out what has brought us to writing. I'm glad you're here writing. I've been here, on and off, since 2008 and I still suck at grammar. When I wrote my book I joked that that's why I had an editor. It wasn't perfect in the end but it was much better than it was. Anyways, I hope you see you around :)

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 18-Mar-2022
    Thank you. I hope to see you around too. I found Grammarly and it really helps with the grammar. Sometimes I over ride it because I think my way sounds better. Hugs to you.