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Comment from Bridge
I'm happy to come across a blitz poem after a long time. I had tried my hand at this form of poetry quite a few years ago. I like the way the poem flows. Well written
With regards
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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I'm happy to come across a blitz poem after a long time. I had tried my hand at this form of poetry quite a few years ago. I like the way the poem flows. Well written
With regards
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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i have a few in this book if you want to check out my others. thank you bridge :)
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Shelley a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. Another fine offering from you, I always enjoy your work. This is one style I won't touch and after reading a lot of your work, it's obvious you can write a blitz poem but could you perform one? I ask cause it seems a lot of the words you write are words you can't/won't say, I know I couldn't pull it off.....anyway I was just wondering. Good job as always. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Hello Shelley a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. Another fine offering from you, I always enjoy your work. This is one style I won't touch and after reading a lot of your work, it's obvious you can write a blitz poem but could you perform one? I ask cause it seems a lot of the words you write are words you can't/won't say, I know I couldn't pull it off.....anyway I was just wondering. Good job as always. Have a great day!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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nooo.... i don't read aloud. (drove my teachers nuts when i was in school lol.
thank you 13 :)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well, I give you credit for understanding the rules of this poem though I am not going to check crossed t's and dots, for sure. How would anyone forget me not? ...................................................
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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Well, I give you credit for understanding the rules of this poem though I am not going to check crossed t's and dots, for sure. How would anyone forget me not? ...................................................
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Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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thank you tom :-)
Comment from RGstar
Well, the cascading type certainly moves with pace. Sometimes a poem can see as though it is designed for the sake of wordplay only, in which this does, but it is an art, if makes sense, so the writer's direction must be appreciated.
Have a great day.
RGstar
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Well, the cascading type certainly moves with pace. Sometimes a poem can see as though it is designed for the sake of wordplay only, in which this does, but it is an art, if makes sense, so the writer's direction must be appreciated.
Have a great day.
RGstar
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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thank you rg :-)
Comment from victor 66
Wow, that was quite a trip through word land. I'm not sure if I understood it all but I did understand most of it. But the best part was, it was just fun and interesting to read what you had written. Free thought deserves recognition. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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Wow, that was quite a trip through word land. I'm not sure if I understood it all but I did understand most of it. But the best part was, it was just fun and interesting to read what you had written. Free thought deserves recognition. Best wishes.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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hehe thank you victor :-)
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As I repeat myself, you?re most welcome. It was my pleasure.
Comment from Begin Again
I'm not a poet and have no understanding of all the rules and such about the many different kinds, but this one seems a real testament to climbing a mountain at warp speed. I couldn't even read it at the pace you suggested...I guess that's what makes it a Blitz. Very well done and interesting.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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I'm not a poet and have no understanding of all the rules and such about the many different kinds, but this one seems a real testament to climbing a mountain at warp speed. I couldn't even read it at the pace you suggested...I guess that's what makes it a Blitz. Very well done and interesting.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 28-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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lol thank you carol :)
Comment from Wendy G
It's a very different format in the stream of consciousness style. It is certainly a quick flow and a breathless style, and it is interesting to see where each thought leads to make up the totality. The theme is not promoted but it is there threading it all together. "Forgive and forget" links with "Forget me not" very well. I'm getting used to it and starting to enjoy this style - good job.
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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It's a very different format in the stream of consciousness style. It is certainly a quick flow and a breathless style, and it is interesting to see where each thought leads to make up the totality. The theme is not promoted but it is there threading it all together. "Forgive and forget" links with "Forget me not" very well. I'm getting used to it and starting to enjoy this style - good job.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2022
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it is very fun to write! thank you wendy :)
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Keep on going. Stop and take a breath. Look around you. Enjoy a peaceful surrounding. You have a great relaxing poem. You have written another great poem. I like you your red heart. Thank you fo rposting. Have a great day. Stay safe.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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Keep on going. Stop and take a breath. Look around you. Enjoy a peaceful surrounding. You have a great relaxing poem. You have written another great poem. I like you your red heart. Thank you fo rposting. Have a great day. Stay safe.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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thankya thankya :-)
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You are popular. You are welcome.
Comment from karenina
If I were a matcher of poems to poets you and the Blitz would be in a steady relationship... Practically engaged! I think of this as your signature style... It's great to see you responding to all these challenges!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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If I were a matcher of poems to poets you and the Blitz would be in a steady relationship... Practically engaged! I think of this as your signature style... It's great to see you responding to all these challenges!
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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lol they are so fun to write!! :)
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Says you!
Mine? Words in a blender!
Smile...
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
What a cool poem! The graphic colors add to the pace of your words. It reads fast and furious, which I happen to enjoy. I had a positive response to it.Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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What a cool poem! The graphic colors add to the pace of your words. It reads fast and furious, which I happen to enjoy. I had a positive response to it.Well done.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2022
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thank you kl :-)
